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Reviewer: mamogirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/10/13 09:07 pm Title: Chapter 15 - That was close!

Mh... another ghost and not too much nice.

Can't wait to know what it's his story! 



Author's Response: Happy that you're still interested. Thank you! :)

Reviewer: Julilly Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/25/12 05:40 pm Title: Chapter 15 - That was close!

I have a confession. I should have been reviewing but I got sucked into the story and got so involved that I kept pushing "next chapter" without thinking! I hope that goes to show how much I am enjoying it. It's definitely interesting now that Michael is seemingly out to get Nick. I'm anxious to see where that goes!

Author's Response: Now, that's more flattering. Glad to know you like the story, and I thought you stopped reading because it wasnt interesting enough. lol Thank you soooo much! :)

Reviewer: Tri Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/31/12 08:58 pm Title: Chapter 15 - That was close!

Geez who did it to him? So many mysteries here! :)

Author's Response: I believe by this time you have read who did it to him.... lol Thanks for reading and leaving a review! :)

Author's Response: I believe by this time you have read who did it to him.... lol Thanks for reading and leaving a review! :)

Reviewer: kevmylove Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/23/12 05:23 am Title: Chapter 15 - That was close!

Sheesh as if worrying about a ghost named Michael is not enough. Could it be Graces dad?!? Haha I love how he picks on Andrea...but she doesn't help much!!

Author's Response: I think Nick would pick on everyone given a chance... lol You have no idea how much you made me happy by seeing your reviews. I love you! lol

Reviewer: Carter-Orange Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/07/11 11:47 am Title: Chapter 15 - That was close!

I'm 100% sure I left a review for this when I read it, but it seems to have vanished!!  Weird.



Author's Response: I thought you did not leave a review for this chapter 'cause you read the two chapters at one time. But it doesn't matter, Steph, the fact you are still reading this story meant a lot more. Thanks!

Reviewer: Mare Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/31/11 02:03 pm Title: Chapter 15 - That was close!

Good chapter, Ritz, just a perfect length do introduce this new character. As far as the BAM! lol I would go with just a short description instead of a 'sound' like a shattering spotlight gave me pause....or something like that. Nicely done and once again i'm all caught up! Until you update again lol unless it's on the weekend. Then i'm good! :O)



Author's Response: I was really not comfortable with the BAM, but I wanted it not be too long because I wanted to surprise the readers why Nick suddenly stopped singing. I'll edit it one of these days. Thanks for the idea! and Yay! I love knowing you are all caught up! But as I've said it's nice still getting reviews even when your story is not on the first page of Most Recent... lol THANK YOU, Mare! :)

Reviewer: Purpura Lipstick Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/28/11 03:27 pm Title: Chapter 15 - That was close!

OOOH I loved it. We aer getting into bad ghosts, maybe miniions of Michaels?   Pshaw if Andrea can't help what use as a guardian is she? geez... maybe she's not maybe she's the eyes and ears of Michael sent by him to watch Nick. LOL. 

Maybe something along the lines of "a loud crash and the sound of breaking glass rang through the arena"?  BUT I think what you have is FINE!!!



Author's Response: You are giving me lots of ideas that I want to consider.... lol Thank you for still reading, Lore, and can I borrow that line? :)