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Reviewer: mamogirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/17/13 04:24 pm Title: Chapter 19 - Gary, Leo and the truth...

Good chapter. 

I'm still reading and waiting to find out something more about this Micheal, I don't remember if you have already said if he is a ghost or someone like Nick, able to talk to ghost but not wanting them to go into the light. Interesting the fact that he wants Nick dead, because obviously Nick is an obstacle to his plan. 



Author's Response: After reading your review, I tried to remember if I did say Michael is a ghost before this chapter. All I could think of was I mentioned him in One of the first mission's chapter that he taught Patty how to go from one place to another. Maybe I should have made it clear that he was a ghost trying to convince other souls not to cross over. Thanks for pointing that out and for still reading. :)

Reviewer: Julilly Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/28/12 03:19 pm Title: Chapter 19 - Gary, Leo and the truth...

I'm surprised Leo was so receptive to the whole "I can see ghosts" thing. I woul be freaking out! Lol



Author's Response: I would be too! lol But Leo has been experiencing a lot of unexplainable things since the accident, so I guess it was easy for him to believe that Nick could see ghosts. Yay! You are almost caught up. Thank you! :)

Reviewer: Tri Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/31/12 09:12 pm Title: Chapter 19 - Gary, Leo and the truth...

Uh oh... What happens when a ghost ignores the light? Good chapter!

Author's Response: As long as they don't have unfinished business on Earth anymore, the light would appear again. But the question is when will it appear again? They might wait for 5 or 10 years... no one knows. Thanks for still reading! :)

Reviewer: Purpura Lipstick Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/23/12 05:43 pm Title: Chapter 19 - Gary, Leo and the truth...

So Leo was there and another guy hit Gary and knocked him onto Leo's car making it look like Leo hit him? HRM... well I'm glad it's resolved and I hope Gary now helps fight Michael. He is persistant and will make a good ghostly ally.



Author's Response: thanks for the review, Lore! yes, I think Nick will be needing Gary at some point.... :)

Reviewer: Carter-Orange Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/23/12 12:15 pm Title: Chapter 19 - Gary, Leo and the truth...

Good to see a new chapter and hope you are enjoying life in Dubai :)  Aww I kind of felt sorry for him in the end, all that time he was seeking revenge on the wrong person but seemed truly sorry when he realised he was wrong.



Author's Response: Dubai is beautiful.... it's just that I miss the kids every freaking second especially that I am not employed yet, I have so much time to think about them. :( Thank you for still reading, Steph! I miss reading reviews and this just put a smile on my face. :)

Reviewer: Mare Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/22/12 04:57 pm Title: Chapter 19 - Gary, Leo and the truth...

Great chapter, Ritz. Glad to see you writing again. I hope you're adjusting well to your new home. 



Author's Response: Thank you, Mare! I am glad I was able to finish this one and could start another case for Nicky... and I think it's quite easier to adjust here in dubai with Hubby around, it's just that I miss the kids every freaking second but I'm doing well. Im actually stronger than I thought. Thanks for asking! :)