Date: 07/22/13 01:25 pm Title: Chapter 21 - Mrs. Debbie Jenkins
Though I'm not very fond of chapters with pictures instead than descriptions, I admit that I loved the story behind the earing. Really sweet and romantic. Actually, I think that is one of the strenght of the story, the backstory behind every ghost. It mustn't been easy coming up with an original one for each of them.
Author's Response: I tried to describe the earrings but I felt it was not enough. The earrings was very beautiful and I wanted the readers to see the earrings just like I do. Yes, it's not easy to come up with characters especially I am trying not to have a character or story same with ghost whisperer. Thanks for reading. :)
Date: 08/09/12 11:41 am Title: Chapter 21 - Mrs. Debbie Jenkins
I think that you're harder on your ability to describe things than you need to be. I think it would be valuable for you to practice descriptions rather than post pictures of what you mean. The reader doesn't always have to have the exact same image as you do. Your description of the earrings may have looked a little different in my head but at the root if it they would be pretty much the same. Let the reader use their imagination a bit, you don't have to describe every detail.
Author's Response: Here is another rleview unanswered, what happened to me? Lol maybe I read your review in the office while I wasn't logged in, then I forgot to answer it at home. I'm really sorry, Julilly. What you said in this review helped me a lot. This is one piece of advice I will never forget. :)
Date: 02/04/12 12:07 pm Title: Chapter 21 - Mrs. Debbie Jenkins
I got a kick out of Nick forgetting he couldn't walk through doors lol good chapter, Ritz! I live how much thought you put into your characters.
Author's Response: Lol... glad you liked that part cause I had a good time writing that and imagining Nick bumping into the glass door. :) Thank you, Mare! I love all of my characters, and i think it's just fair to write them the way they deserved to be written. Thanks for reading! :)
Date: 01/31/12 09:18 pm Title: Chapter 21 - Mrs. Debbie Jenkins
Ooo Nick's gonna meet his future girlfriend? Can't wait. Hope you update soon!! I'm so excited for more. :)
Author's Response: Awww you remember Kate! Yay! and you're all caught up! Thank you! You rock! :)
Date: 01/30/12 09:41 pm Title: Chapter 21 - Mrs. Debbie Jenkins
Being a Backstreet Boy really did come in handy! She was very helpful, I just hope he can get those earrings back.
Author's Response: Carter has been using his charm... lol thanks for the review, Steph. Let's see if Kate still have them... :)
Author's Response: Carter has been using his charm... lol thanks for the review, Steph. Let's see if Kate still have them... :)
Date: 01/30/12 05:46 pm Title: Chapter 21 - Mrs. Debbie Jenkins
ooh I hope Kate is understanding and will get them back. How heartwrenching for Debbie's husband to have to sell them in order to pay hospital bills. So sad.
Author's Response: we'll see... She's Kate after all.... :) Thanks for reading, Lore! :)
