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Reviewer: mamogirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/26/13 07:07 pm Title: Chapter 24 - Mini Reunion

Wow. I didn't expect this twist. And yay for finally Micheal doing something. lol 



Author's Response: LOL you really like Michael... I hope I'll get the time and inspiration to write again. Michael is set be on the next chapters. thanks for the love for Michael. lol

Reviewer: Julilly Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/09/12 12:42 pm Title: Chapter 24 - Mini Reunion

I found this chapter a little confusing, to be honest. I felt like a lot happened really quickly but that I wasn't 100% in the know about the who, what and why. It just felt a little jumpy and could use some more description between the dialogue to better set up the scene. 

Reviewer: Mare Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/21/12 11:46 am Title: Chapter 24 - Mini Reunion

Aw now we know who is trying to harm Nick although I have to say I don't remember who Grace is lol but that's just me and my crappy memory. Great job as usual Ritz! Also glad to see that you have been updating the story!

Reviewer: Tri Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/08/12 09:57 pm Title: Chapter 24 - Mini Reunion

Great chapter! Looking forward to more...

Reviewer: Carter-Orange Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/08/12 07:32 pm Title: Chapter 24 - Mini Reunion

Ooo I wonder what that means for Nick now?  Great chapter Ritz!

Reviewer: Purpura Lipstick Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/08/12 07:22 pm Title: Chapter 24 - Mini Reunion

interesting combining of what's happened to him. It seems the ghosts are choosing sides for the "War" to come.