Date: 07/26/13 07:25 pm Title: Chapter 25 - George
Oh, finally we know more about Micheal and his history, as well as reason why he doesn't want ghosts to cross over.
I love his backstory. It's realistic and you kinda feel for him because all he wanted was to be with his wife and, guessing that someone made her cross over, now he kinda wants his revenge.
Great job with this chapter! ^__^
Author's Response: Aww thank you. I hope I conveyed the message that Michael is just a broken soul who wants revenge, that he is not a powerful one sent by the devils or whatever. Though, he seems powerful because he already learned almost everything that a ghost can do. Thanks for the review. I'm glad Michael didn't disappoint you. :)
Date: 08/09/12 12:46 pm Title: Chapter 25 - George
I tried to figure out what was wrong with your chapter lineup that is making one. Halter show up blank but I couldn't. :/ should there have been a valentines day I before valentines day II?
Date: 06/25/12 11:58 pm Title: Chapter 25 - George
Hey Ritz! I'm on here grabbing your chapters to add to my site (I was a few chapters behind) and noticed there's no Chapter 26. Chapter 25 is showing up as posted twice in the table of contents, and when I click Next to go to 26, it brings up a blank page. It's probably just an AC glitch; I was just wondering if it showed up correctly for you or if you could try re-posting Chapter 26. Just wanted to let you know!
Author's Response: Hi Julie, thanks for pointing that out. I honestly don't know how to fix it. Same thing happens to me, if I click next from the 1st chap 25, it will show up blank page. But if I click both chapters 25 from the chapter menu page, it both contains the story. I am afraid I will delete the correct one and loose the reviews. when I uploaded chapter 26, it became chapter 27. I'll try to fix this before uploading the next chapter. Thank you. :)
Date: 06/25/12 12:53 pm Title: Chapter 25 - George
Since I have time, I'm playing catch up on some stories. Loved the backstory on Michael and why he is so mean. Hopefully the other three can keep Nick safe!
Author's Response: Oh, Mare, how I miss your reviews.... lol. thank you for still reading. I'll keep my promise to you and update soooon. :)
Date: 03/27/12 08:40 pm Title: Chapter 25 - George
I suppose I can understand why Michael is bitter, but making others unhappy is just wrong and I hope Nick can stop him! Good to see you back Ritz :)
Author's Response: Rest assured Nick will do everything to stop Michael. thank you for the review, Steph and sorry for the super late reply. :)
Date: 03/26/12 06:07 pm Title: Chapter 25 - George
Interesting, so Michael is just holding a grudge! I bet you his wife crossed over thinking he was there! *sigh* he's been reaking havoc based on a misunderstanding. :(
Author's Response: That was the story George heard... that Michael's wife crossed over. but the question is, did she? LOL. Thank you for the review, Lore, and sorry for the super late reply. :)
Author's Response: That was the story George heard... that Michael's wife crossed over. but the question is, did she? LOL. Thank you for the review, Lore, and sorry for the super late reply. :)
Date: 03/26/12 05:50 pm Title: Chapter 25 - George
I was just thinking about this story last night, wondering if you were working on it anymore. I'm so glad you updated today! :) I'm glad that we know more about Michael now and what he's doing and why... But I hope that Nick can keep helping spirits cross over without getting hurt himself. Great chapter! I'm looking forward to another update again soon!!
Author's Response: You girl sure reads fast! LOL I am glad you are still reading.... work is keeping me busy so I didn't have time to write but the ideas are still flooding my mind. :) Thank you, Tri! :)
