Date: 10/30/11 01:14 pm Title: Chapter 11 - Brian's 30th... and Michael who?
Aww, I hate being so far behind. I always lose track of wehat I have read and what i still need to read. First off, yay to being in Hershey. That's pretty close to where I live. That gave me a warm fuzzy feeling. Is that odd? lol I love this new element of Michale not being happy. Every good supernatural story needs a villian! Can't wait to see what happens next and because i'm behind, I don't have too!! *goes to read the next chapter*
Author's Response: You live in PA? it's not odd at all... lol I am following the boys' Never Gone Tour Itinerary, just not in the same order though. I am glad everyone liked that twist about Michael. I am soooo happy you are still reading, Mare. Because you told me that if you don't like where the story is going you might just stop reading. Thank you!!!! :)
Date: 10/28/11 03:27 pm Title: Chapter 15 - That was close!
OOOH I loved it. We aer getting into bad ghosts, maybe miniions of Michaels? Pshaw if Andrea can't help what use as a guardian is she? geez... maybe she's not maybe she's the eyes and ears of Michael sent by him to watch Nick. LOL.
Maybe something along the lines of "a loud crash and the sound of breaking glass rang through the arena"? BUT I think what you have is FINE!!!
Author's Response: You are giving me lots of ideas that I want to consider.... lol Thank you for still reading, Lore, and can I borrow that line? :)
Date: 10/27/11 07:39 am Title: Chapter 14 - Princess Boo Boo
Damn girl, I got super misty eyed here!!! >__< I'm glad James finally decided to hear Nick out and believe it all. I can't imagine how hard it must have been for him to digest it all, but the words spoken from Grace were so sweet! I'm glad he was able to finally forgive himself and release his baby sister to the light. But my my... the interaction between James and Grace, I never wanted it to end, I didn't want Grace to go! But, with the way she described the light, and how Nick immediately knew what she was referring to... such a beautiful scene!
Now, on to this Michael guy. He's really beginning to creep me out!! As I read the ending, I seriously got chills! O__O Ugh. What a GREAT update though Ritz, and you know, as always, I'm looking forward to the next chapter! :) <3
Author's Response: I'm sorry but it really makes me happy that this chapter has an effect on you, guys! LOL Nick has to thank Princess Boo Boo 'cause that's what made James believed. I loved that scene on the backstage as well... It was more beutiful when it was playing on my mind like a movie. Thank you for still reading, sweets! :)
Date: 10/26/11 04:56 pm Title: Chapter 14 - Princess Boo Boo
oh Ritz that chapter brought a tear to my eye. It was so emotional. Oh and now we know there are angry ghosts like her dad. I wonder if he will try to help him too and what kind of push back he will get from him. and I am super curious about "Mr." Michael. :)
Author's Response: Is it bad to be happy that this chapter brought a tear to your eyes? I am just glad that I was able to portray their emotions. I am so curious about Mr. Michael as well... I haven't sit down and think about whi he really is and stuff. Nick just decided for him to be the bad guy. Thanks for reading, Lore! :)
Date: 10/26/11 05:12 am Title: Chapter 13 - Mr. Carter, please help me.....
Aww man Ritz!! Again, this case is heartbreaking!! Poor little Grace, and her brother! I'd understand why James would feel angry and insensitive about it, but I truly hope with Grace's last message to him will make him sit down and listen to everything Nick has to tell him! :(
Great update hun, and I seriously can't wait for the next! :) <3
Author's Response: You and your amazing reviews! lol Thanks you so much for still reading, Reb! and Yay for you understanding James... Another heartbreaking chapter is coming up! lol
Date: 10/25/11 08:40 pm Title: Chapter 13 - Mr. Carter, please help me.....
oh that has to be scarey talking to someone about that stuff.. I really enjoy how you introduce the different ghosts. I can't wait to see how the guy reacts to what Nick told him! Thanks for the udpate Ritz.
Author's Response: Thank you, Lore!!!! I am glad you are enjoying this one... And thank you for sharing Nick with me, I am ready for another chapter... lol
Date: 10/25/11 08:00 pm Title: Chapter 13 - Mr. Carter, please help me.....
I hope James turns back and believes Nick, how else would Nick know those details. Really enjoyed that Ritz and can't wait for more!
Author's Response: James is a very stubborn man which is understandable... hope we'll understand him more in the next chapter. Thank you sooo much for reading, Steph!
Date: 10/24/11 10:12 am Title: Chapter 12 - Andrea
Not a boring chapter at all Ritz, it's good to have some chapters like this where we're getting some background information. I hope this Michael doesn't do anything to hurt Nick though.
Looking forward to more :)
Author's Response: Awww thank you, Steph! I am so glad you are still reading this story... :)
Date: 10/23/11 10:55 am Title: Chapter 12 - Andrea
Poor Nick... to have people's eyes on and think you're crazy is not a cool feeling! Especially when what you're going through would be enough to make ANYONE feel like they're going crazy!
But, ahh... this is THE Andrea! So, I guess Nick was right with his uneasy feelings of Michael! And totally random, but reading how spiritual this story is, you would've been the perfect collab person I could have asked to work with me on my Archangels story! ^_^ Lol. But anywho, this is all getting so interesting!
Of course, I'm still in love with this story and I seriously can't WAIT for the next chapter!! ^_^
Author's Response: Yep poor confused Nick. I really hope Andrea would help him not make him more confused. :) Can I favorite this review? LOL. If you have asked me to write that story with you, I would have turned it down because you write that story so perfectly well, and I would just ruin it. :) Thank you for ALL your amazing reviews.... hope you'll be with me until the end of the story. :) *hugs*
Date: 10/23/11 10:49 am Title: Chapter 11 - Brian's 30th... and Michael who?
So, I gotta say, I LOVED that line, "Jeez Brian, you talk Leighanne now!" LMFAO!!!
But, you've managed to do it again with yet another chapter... thinking and writing outside the box! The way you introduce these ghost characters to us really intrigues me! And man... just when I thought the "Michael" ghost was a good guy, you have someone to make Nick wonder again about this mysterious fellow. Unless... unless the girl isn't a good spirit, and perhaps a bad spirit that doesn't want these souls to cross over. Hmm...
I love the way you wrote Nick going into a "vision", so to speak, of him being present during a shooting that happened in the restaurant it seems. And how he connected back with the presence, and still couldn't separate the two. Man... he's got a lot of explaining to do I suppose for shouting what he did! "/
Author's Response: Why do we keep loving the same lines? LOL . For the record, I love Leighanne! :) Blame it to Nick, he was the one who decided that Michael isn't a good guy after all. lol. It was the first vision he saw and thought it was really happening. Poor Nick. I hope you won't get tired of my Thank Yous.... :)
Date: 10/23/11 10:41 am Title: Chapter 10 - Mr. Big Ben..... Part 2
I LOL at Kevin stating that Nick, Brian and AJ were the popular members of the group and he needed to take one of the three! LOL
But awwww shit!! That was sooo freaking emotional!! Man... this really makes me feel like this all really happened... that Nick can really see ghosts and help them fulfill their unfinished business so they can finally make it to heaven! Ugh Ritz, this is sooo beautiful!! >__<
Author's Response: hahaha. that was bad, wasn't it? It shows that I won't listen to an interview if it were just Kevin and Howie... Thank you for your beautiful and encouraging words. :)
Date: 10/23/11 09:50 am Title: Chapter 9 - Mr. Big Ben.... Part 1
Wow Ritz... this chapter was amazing! Definitely different! I truly thought Big Ben was really there, until, of course, Big Ben was surprised that Nick could see him! Man... this whole story, but particularly this chapter really makes me think if that's how our deceased loved ones are... standing beside us, making remarks that they know we can't hear. :'( I can't stop saying how truly amazing this whole fic is Ritz!
Ironically, when I was in middle school, we had a security guard named Ben, and we called him "Big Ben". He was such a sweetheart... the biggest teddy bear you'd ever meet! One recess, when I was playing volleyball with my friends, he came into the court and started joking with us. He went off to play basketball with some boys while I took a break from volleyball to finish up some homework. Next thing I knew, a golf cart came racing into the courts, urging kids to move. I looked up to see Big Ben on the ground. Staff chased us out of the courts, and as I walked past, I heard someone say, "He's not breathing... I can't revive him!" Big Ben had died from a heart attack. :(
So, of course as I read this chapter, I thought of an old security guard that became a friend of mine. :( But again, this is just truly amazing Ritz, and I fucking LOVE you for writing this great fic! :)
Author's Response: That was a really sad story and I'm sorry if this story brought up some memories. :( Hope Big Ben is in a very good place right now. I am using names that first comes to my mind, the only names I'm reserching are the last names because I'm not familiar with those. I believe in this ghost stuff because my sister can see them, but luckily they don't talk to her and ask for her help. Thank you, Reb and I hope by now you know that I freaking LOVE you too!
Date: 10/23/11 08:57 am Title: Chapter 8 - First Mission..... Part 5
Wow. This was an absolutely beautiful chapter!! And I don't blame Nick, I fucking hate goodbyes too and wouldn't want to part with Patty sooo soon! The way you wrote Patty really draws you in, and like you said, I'm gonna miss her as well! :( I'm glad she's found the light though!
What a touching chapter, and I know it'll only continue to be more touching! :)
Author's Response: I had a feeling that if Patty wasn't a ghost, Nick would definitely asked her out. lol I became so attached to Patty that I didn't want to let her go, but she deserves to be peaceful at last. I'll always miss her, though. :)
Date: 10/23/11 07:42 am Title: Chapter 7 - First Mission..... Part 4
I really love how you wrote this chapter! It's hard for me to explain, but it's like simple, yet so profound! I love the interaction between Patty and Nick! And gotta love AJ's response to Nick's favor! Lol. But, even with the smallest details in this story, you can tell that you really thought out of the box!
Now... the reveal. My GOSH that seriously tugged on my heartstrings! Definitely reminded me of the movie "Ghost". Poor Patty and Barbara! :'( That was really nice of Nick to also supply her with tickets to "claim" her daughter. This was really heartwrenching, and I loved the way you ended it!
Author's Response: Awww thank you so much! One of the nicest thing I've ever recieved for this story. You can really see how much I love AJ. lol I think Nick doubted that Barbara would believed him, so he thought giving her tickets would make it easier for her to check out MN. I loved the ending as well, you can tell I can't let go of Patty. lol
Date: 10/23/11 06:01 am Title: Chapter 6 - First Mission..... Part 3
Aww damn, this just got deep! I'm glad Nick went back and decided to help Patty! :)
Author's Response: I was so proud of Carter! LOL I can't thank you enough for giving this story a chance. :)
