Date: 07/26/13 07:16 pm Title: Chapter 26 - Valentine's Day
Awwww....
I think that my favorite part is when Nick gave Andrea a flower. Really sweet. Can ghost have relationship? LOL That can be another idea for a story! lol
But really a sweet chapter. ^__^
Author's Response: Yes, that would be a good idea for another story. I think it's really sweet too. Nick loves Andrea but as his guardian. No relationship for Nick and Andrea on this story. lol
Date: 07/26/13 07:07 pm Title: Chapter 24 - Mini Reunion
Wow. I didn't expect this twist. And yay for finally Micheal doing something. lol
Author's Response: LOL you really like Michael... I hope I'll get the time and inspiration to write again. Michael is set be on the next chapters. thanks for the love for Michael. lol
Date: 07/26/13 07:03 pm Title: Chapter 23 - Max, Debbie and the Light
Oh no, poor Nick: got caught while talking to someone who doesn't exist anymore. LOL I don't know why but it's a funny image to me. LOL
Author's Response: It's actually funny... Nick is one of those guys you wouldn't catch talking to himself. lol Thanks for reading!
Date: 07/22/13 01:28 pm Title: Chapter 22 - Kaitlyn Jade Harris
Strange and interesting way of ending the chapter. The heavy breathing usually doesn't mean good news. lol
Author's Response: I know. I tried ending a chapter with something that would make readers want for more, and I think it worked a little. Lol thanks!
Date: 07/22/13 01:25 pm Title: Chapter 21 - Mrs. Debbie Jenkins
Though I'm not very fond of chapters with pictures instead than descriptions, I admit that I loved the story behind the earing. Really sweet and romantic. Actually, I think that is one of the strenght of the story, the backstory behind every ghost. It mustn't been easy coming up with an original one for each of them.
Author's Response: I tried to describe the earrings but I felt it was not enough. The earrings was very beautiful and I wanted the readers to see the earrings just like I do. Yes, it's not easy to come up with characters especially I am trying not to have a character or story same with ghost whisperer. Thanks for reading. :)
Date: 07/17/13 04:31 pm Title: Chapter 20 - Earrings
Aww, Max is really a sweet ghost. And yes, I think that his unfinished business if realted to the other ghost. It's like he is her protector.
Author's Response: I love Max, too. If there is a way for his character to come back, I would do it. Thanks for reading! :)
Date: 07/17/13 04:24 pm Title: Chapter 19 - Gary, Leo and the truth...
Good chapter.
I'm still reading and waiting to find out something more about this Micheal, I don't remember if you have already said if he is a ghost or someone like Nick, able to talk to ghost but not wanting them to go into the light. Interesting the fact that he wants Nick dead, because obviously Nick is an obstacle to his plan.
Author's Response: After reading your review, I tried to remember if I did say Michael is a ghost before this chapter. All I could think of was I mentioned him in One of the first mission's chapter that he taught Patty how to go from one place to another. Maybe I should have made it clear that he was a ghost trying to convince other souls not to cross over. Thanks for pointing that out and for still reading. :)
Date: 07/17/13 04:10 pm Title: Chapter 18 - Craziness should stop!
This Gary ghost's situation is interesting and I like the fact that he could be influenced by Micheal.
Author's Response: Thank you, and by this time, I think you know if Gary is related to Michael or not. Thanks for still reading. :)
Date: 07/12/13 03:08 pm Title: Chapter 17 - Drugs and Sex
I kinda get why Brian would ask Nick that question. Not because he doesn't trust him but only because he is worried. And he kinda has the right to be worried since, from an outsider point of view, Nick's behaviour can be seen as strange.
Aj. Well, Aj is Aj! So of course he's gonna be worried more about the fact that Nick doesn't have sex with fans anymore!
Author's Response: Yes. Nick's behavior changed a lot since his birthday, and the guys thought he was up to no good again. They are just worried because they love Nick. :)
Date: 07/10/13 09:13 pm Title: Chapter 16 - Leo
Ohhh, an angry ghost searching for his revenge. I love it! lol
Poor Nick that is in the middle of his revenge, though. lol
Author's Response: I figured Nick should meet an angry one. Lol thank you for still reading. :)
Date: 07/10/13 09:07 pm Title: Chapter 15 - That was close!
Mh... another ghost and not too much nice.
Can't wait to know what it's his story!
Author's Response: Happy that you're still interested. Thank you! :)
Date: 07/10/13 08:57 pm Title: Chapter 14 - Princess Boo Boo
I teared up a little, little kids and girls always make me cry. It was really sweet.
Mh... this Micheal is really interesting. I'm already imaging an epic battle between him and Nick. lol
Author's Response: Awww thank you. As a mother I am really careful when writing about children. This chapter made me sad while I was typing it.
Date: 07/10/13 08:49 pm Title: Chapter 13 - Mr. Carter, please help me.....
Well, it was bound to happen sooner or later. There have to be someone who wouldn't believe Nick while saying "I can see ghosts". I'll probably react in the same way, thinking that either he's crazy or he has been paid to play a joke on me.
Now it's gonna be interesting to see how Nick will try to change James' mind and make him believing in him.
Author's Response: Yes. Not everyone believes in ghost, I figured someone has to make it hard for Nick. I hope the next chapter is believable enough. Thank you!
Date: 07/08/13 08:50 pm Title: Chapter 12 - Andrea
Interesting chapter. New informations, though they're still a little bit vague.
I don't know if you are going to talk about it in the future chaps but I'm trying to figure it out what it means when Andrea said that Micheal is a broken soul. I guess that, just like every "battle", there has to be the good side and the bad side and what had pushed Micheal to chose one instead than the other. (I admit that sometimes I prefer villain rather than the heroes because there is so much more work to build them as characters. Great characters.)
I'm so loving all those little things between Brian and Nick. lol Only Brian can know when Nick is lying or not. lol
Author's Response: I love how you write a review. It's very honest and straightforward. Thank you for that. Your reviews are very well appreciated. :) I really find it hard to write a story with a little bit of mystery. I don't know if I have given just enough information. Sometimes, because you dont want to give away too much, you restrict the details in the story not knowing it comes off as a little vague to the readers. I hope all your questions will be answered soon. :)
Date: 07/08/13 08:40 pm Title: Chapter 11 - Brian's 30th... and Michael who?
What a cliffhanger!
And, poor Brian, what a birthday! lol
It's interesting this new power that Nick has discovered to possess. As I said, I'm really loving the plotline.
Author's Response: It's good to know that you're still into the story. Thank you very much,
