Date: 10/09/11 10:26 pm Title: Chapter 9 - Mr. Big Ben.... Part 1
ah... big ben sounds sweet. That was a nice chapter Ritz.
Author's Response: Thank you for reading, Lore! It makes me glad knowing you are sticking with me on this one. :)
Date: 10/08/11 05:41 pm Title: Chapter 9 - Mr. Big Ben.... Part 1
aww, poor Big Ben. Sounds like a nice guy, i'm curious to see how Nick will help him out. Keep up the great work Ritz!
Author's Response: He's really a nice guy. Thank you for sticking with me and I hope you are not yet bored with this story. I promise some action in the next chapter after Big Ben. Thanks for reading! :)
Date: 10/08/11 05:38 pm Title: Chapter 8 - First Mission..... Part 5
Aww nice scene with Patty and the mom. And yay to Patty crossing over and Nick's message to his fans at the end. :O)
Author's Response: I find it really funny that his message to the fans in the end was the first that crossed my mind, and I had to think of the story backwards. I am really glad that Mrs. Jasperson isn't a stubborn one and believed Nick right away. I guess Nick didn't want any more drama and thought 5 chapters were enough. Thank you, Mare!
Date: 10/08/11 05:06 pm Title: Chapter 9 - Mr. Big Ben.... Part 1
Good to see a new chapter and a new challenge for Nick! Wonder what he'll have to do for Big Ben.
Author's Response: Yay! I am glad I am not making you bore on this story... just 2 chapter more and I think we'll have some action here. lol Thanks, Steph!
Date: 10/07/11 01:05 pm Title: Chapter 8 - First Mission..... Part 5
Aww that was sad but good, glad Patty got to cross over at the end. Great chapter Ritz :)
Author's Response: Thank you! I was glad too but I'm gonna miss her.... lol
Date: 10/06/11 05:23 pm Title: Chapter 8 - First Mission..... Part 5
oh how sweet for Patty! I like how her mother tried to protect him from being discovered. I wonder about this Michael fella too. Hrm .. can't wait for the next update Ritz.
Author's Response: Michael is just a random guy at first but Nick wanted it otherwise.... lol Thanks for sticking with me, Lore. Now, we're off to the second mission *grins*
Date: 10/03/11 11:05 am Title: Chapter 7 - First Mission..... Part 4
Aww I felt so sad for Patty's mum, all these years she's been hoping she made something of herself in New York when really she died at the concert no one knew she was at :( I wonder if she'll be freaked out by what Nick tells her.
Really enjoying this Ritz, such a great idea.
Author's Response: it was really pretty sad, but as a mommy she can never stop hoping and wishing, right? thanks for reading, Steph! :)
Date: 10/03/11 03:46 am Title: Chapter 7 - First Mission..... Part 4
Aww, that was heartbreaking. It took a lot of guts for Nick to tell Patty's Mom the truth and you did a great job describing it. :O)
Author's Response: I am so proud of Nick for having the courage to tell Patty's mom. Thanks for the compliment, Mare. It was really a heartbreaking moment and I wished I described the scene better. So I am happy you liked it! :)
Date: 10/01/11 07:32 pm Title: Chapter 7 - First Mission..... Part 4
He went through with telling her. It was a great chapter Ritz! Can't wait to see what's coming next.
Author's Response: Yes. and I am so proud of Nick! Thanks for the review, Lore and for still reading this story. :)
Date: 09/25/11 01:06 pm Title: Chapter 6 - First Mission..... Part 3
I'm glad Patty was able to make it out of the Staples center and I lol'd at Nick not being bothered by talking to a ghost or knowing he shared a cab with one. I'm really enjoying this story Ritz. And yay! I'm all caught up! :O)
Author's Response: Yay! Thank you for nice reviews, Mare and I am soooo glad you are enjoying this! :)
Date: 09/25/11 05:01 am Title: Chapter 5 - First Mission..... Part 2
Aww Poor Patty. I hope he decides to go see her family. Great job with your dialogue and back story of wht happened to her. :O)
Author's Response: Thank you, Mare! I was actually nervous about this chapter being full of dialogues and lesser descriptive paragraph. I'm so glad you liked it! Yay! :)
Date: 09/24/11 05:36 pm Title: Chapter 6 - First Mission..... Part 3
Aww I'm glad he decided to help her, and also glad Patty met another ghost who can help her out.
Author's Response: we're all glad Nicky gave in and decided to help her... Thanks for the review, dear! :)
Date: 09/24/11 12:55 am Title: Chapter 6 - First Mission..... Part 3
Aaaah she has the Cullen 'watch you while you sleep' complex. lol. I'm glad Nick gave into helping her tho. Great job, Ritz.
Author's Response: LOL I didn't realize that until now.... Patty just wanted to make sure Nick would help her, if Nick didn't go back to Target Center I think Patty would have done something so Nick would help her. I'm glad you're catching up with the reading. THANK YOU! :)
Date: 09/24/11 12:46 am Title: Chapter 5 - First Mission..... Part 2
Oh Nick! Seriuosly, he dind't even do it for her. Ugh...that's not cool. Then again he's scared shitless...Hell, I would be too.
Author's Response: what she wanted Nick to do was freaking hard plus Nick is Nick.... lol thanks for the review, sweetheart. :)
Date: 09/24/11 12:39 am Title: Chapter 4 - First Mission..... Part 1
You know, Nick deserves that scare for playing with Abby's emotions. Oh wait...wrong story. lol. This chapter was really cool and I like how (if I didn't already kinda know his ability) I wouldn't have known she was until the zombie face. You are doing a great job Ritz. *thumbs up*
Author's Response: LMAO! but hey I think so too.... Nick definitely deserves that for playing with Abby's emotions. LOL oh my goodness, dear, I can't stop laughing..... Thank you for the reviews!
