Date: 09/23/11 04:54 pm Title: Chapter 6 - First Mission..... Part 3
I love it Ritz. I can't wait to read more. If I missed any grammar things it was because I got so into the story that I just kept reading. I read it twice to try to make sure I got them but ... lol I was just sucked in.
Author's Response: oh that's fine, my dear. And by the way thanks for making the ( ) thing, it made me aware what my mistakes were and how to correct it. I was like 'oh yeah it should be in not on...' thanks for taking time to help me with the grammar, reading this and reviewing! I really, really appreciate it! :)
Date: 09/23/11 07:15 am Title: Chapter 4 - First Mission..... Part 1
Ok...so It's like midnight and I was about to read this chapter, but um...yeah I'm scurred. Don't laugh. I will read it tomorrow morning. :)
Author's Response: Ok, I won't laugh. Thanks for taking time to let me know you're reading this.... :)
Date: 09/23/11 07:14 am Title: Chapter 3 - Silver Anniversary
Bring on the ghosties after his passing out. Silver birthday? Uh...sorry I'm a doofus! Good job Ritz!
Author's Response: Thanks, Erika!!!! The silver anniversary thing wasn't my original idea but not gonna lie that I loved the concept. lol
Date: 09/19/11 08:50 pm Title: Chapter 4 - First Mission..... Part 1
Just trying to catch up on some reading. Sorry i'm a chapter behind. I loved the description of what she looked like after telling Nick she was dead. Totally freaky! Great job! :O)
Author's Response: aww Thank you, Mare. I'm glad you are still catching up... your review always put a big smile on my face. lol
Date: 09/19/11 07:40 pm Title: Chapter 5 - First Mission..... Part 2
Aw poor Patty, that must be so hard for her and Nick isn't going to help. But it's all new to him and he's bound to be shocked at seeing a ghost. Maybe he'll change his mind.
Author's Response: I hope he's really thinking hard if he's ready to help her. Thanks for reading, steph. and for your review as always. :)
Date: 09/19/11 03:47 pm Title: Chapter 5 - First Mission..... Part 2
oh he didn't help her?? oh no... I can understand why. I mean .. ghosts and all talking to you and asking for help. I'm not sure I would help. You did a great job on the ending. I liked it. Can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: um, hopefully Nick is on his hotel room thinking hard about this... but I would really understand him if he won't come back to the center and help Patty. aww Lore, thank you for your help and sticking with me. :)
Date: 09/13/11 02:40 am Title: Chapter 3 - Silver Anniversary
Aww wonder if the passing out has something too do with his abilities. I like the silver birthday. lol
Author's Response: Silver Anniversary thing was not my original, though. I heard one friend greeted another friend that on her 25th birthday. Glad you like it. And thank you for reading and leaving review. :)
Date: 09/12/11 03:58 pm Title: Chapter 4 - First Mission..... Part 1
oh my gosh!! she turned scary on him! Did she do it to prove she was dead or is there a darker reason! Oh I can't wait to see where this mission goes.
Author's Response: I guess just to prove that she was already dead, and I hope Nick believed her already. Thank you for still reading this, Lore. I am giving my best on this story and your reviews means so much. Thanks! :)
Date: 09/12/11 01:00 pm Title: Chapter 4 - First Mission..... Part 1
I really enjoyed that chapter Ritz. When she made the face at him, it reminded me a little of the film Beetlejuice, lol. I can just imagine him putting on the charm for the fans, and we all love it!
Author's Response: Thank you, steph. We all love the Carter Charm.... lol
Date: 09/09/11 07:30 pm Title: Chapter 3 - Silver Anniversary
Well, glad his b-day ended well for him anyway.
UPDATE!!!!!
~Lenni~
Author's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewing again, Lenni. :) You know Nicky, he would be happy just spending it with his brothers. :)
Date: 09/09/11 07:24 pm Title: Chapter 3 - Silver Anniversary
So this power overcame him at the stroke of midnight, cool! It was nice to celebrate his birthday with the boys, even if he only managed two drinks.
Author's Response: Yep. I guess a gift for his Silver Anniversary? LOL Thank you for reading Steph, while you wait for your delicious belgian waffle. And for leaving a nice review as always. :)
Date: 09/09/11 07:03 pm Title: Chapter 3 - Silver Anniversary
Nice. I liked it..it wssn't crap just setting it up for the visions of ghosts. Can't wait for more.
Author's Response: awww thank you. I just felt like I could have done more, emphasize what really happened with Nick when the clock struck midnight. I am so ready for Chapter 4. lol :)
Date: 09/07/11 06:59 pm Title: Chapter 2 - Time to let go
AW this chap was sad. He really loved Kate. I'm glad all the guys were there to support him and his family had somewhat good excuses for not being there.
I like his relationship with Leila! Great job Ritz!
Author's Response: The guys won't leave their youngest's side... I enjoyed writing that part where I enumerated what they did for Nicky. It came naturally cause we all know how much they love each other. And yes, he was madly in love with Kate. It's kinda hard to leave Leila for the meantime since next chap is a flashback. I'd miss her. lol Thank you for the review, Erika. I appreciate you're reading this. :)
Date: 09/07/11 02:37 am Title: Chapter 2 - Time to let go
I'm enjoying it some. :) It's getting interesting.
UPDATE!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
Author's Response: Yay! Glad to see you're reading this, Lenni. Thanks for reading and for leaving a review. :)
Date: 09/06/11 10:37 pm Title: Chapter 2 - Time to let go
Nicely done Ritz. I loved the drive with Nick talking to the spirits who attended Kate's funeral. Also loved the anger he expressed at her not sticking around and then the ghost walking out on him. You are doing a great job writing this. There were only a few errors, but nothing major. I love how creative this is. I don't think i've read Nick as a ghost whisperer yet. Keep up the great work!
Author's Response: awwww Thank you so much, Mare. Your review is greatly appreciated. This means so much to me. Thanks for reading. :)
