Date: 07/03/13 08:31 pm Title: Chapter 10 - Mr. Big Ben..... Part 2
Awwww...this chapter was really sweet. I teared up a little about Ben and the gift for his wife. True love even after death.
And second aww for Brian, always defending Nick. lol
Author's Response: I love some Frick and Frack moment sometimes... even though I'm an A-rok girl. lol Thanks for still reading. :)
Date: 06/25/13 09:20 pm Title: Chapter 9 - Mr. Big Ben.... Part 1
Wow.
This was really really sad. I would have loved to see and read how they remembered him but I know it wasn't really the main point of the chapter and of the mission.
Author's Response: I love Mr. Big Ben. I didn't try to write that part because I was afraid I wouldn't give justice to that beautiful moment. thanks for all your feedback. They are all much appreciated. :)
Date: 06/25/13 09:07 pm Title: Chapter 8 - First Mission..... Part 5
Aw, Nick's message in the end was so sweet!
Author's Response: I agree. I think Nick matured a little because of Patty. :)
Date: 06/22/13 02:41 pm Title: Chapter 7 - First Mission..... Part 4
Ok, I found the answer for my previous question. lol
It mustn't be easy for Nick, I don't know if I'll be able to do what he's going to do. You'll never get used to this kind of things.
LMAO at Brian and his joke about the invisible girlfriend. lol
Author's Response: I love that invisible girlfriend joke, too. For a second, I told myself I was genius when I came up with that. lol. Thank you!
Date: 06/22/13 02:37 pm Title: Chapter 6 - First Mission..... Part 3
I knew Nick wouldn't do nothing for Patty.
Mh... I wonder who that Micheal is. And, especially, why he appeared only now and not during those four years.
Just a question. Why was Patty's body still unclaimed? Didn't she has some kind of ID to enter the concert?
Aside that, great chapter! ^__^ I'm really liking the story, even though it's a Nick's story. lol
Author's Response: You'll know more about Michael soon! and to answer your question, I must have not thought about that part carefully. In the Philippines, where I came from, we dont need ID to enter for a concert, unless of course we're claiming a VIP package. Patty's ticket was not front row. I should have mentioned she left her bag somewhere. Thanks for asking about that. :)
Date: 06/22/13 02:31 pm Title: Chapter 5 - First Mission..... Part 2
Poor Patricia. ç_ç Her story is really sad, stuck where she died without even somewhere to go (i guess she can't go towards the light until she knows that her family moves on, right?).
And poor Nick. Between finding hard to believe that he can see ghost and wanting to help her,he's struck as well.
Author's Response: Yes! that's what's holding her back, she wants her Mommy to know she's gone. Thank you for the review.
Date: 06/17/13 05:22 pm Title: Chapter 4 - First Mission..... Part 1
Oh man, what a start for a first mission! A fan! lol And an Howie girl!
I likw how it goes from funny things to serious stuff naturally. I'm not a fan of stories told in first person but, for this kind of story, it suits perfectly.
Author's Response: I like writing in third person POV but I think this story is better with first person. Thank you!
Date: 06/17/13 05:17 pm Title: Chapter 3 - Silver Anniversary
It was a fun chapter, sort of a preparation of what is coming next, I think.
The silver anniversary, that's really fun. Only Nick would come up with something like that.
Author's Response: I'm happy that you're enjoying reading this one. Thank you.
Date: 06/14/13 09:39 pm Title: Chapter 2 - Time to let go
I love how you manage to slip in a little bit information about the ghost's life here on Earth: one would think that it shouldn't be that hard, they're ghost. Still, I kinda feel for them, forced to stay by one's side but not being able to do nothing for them.
I love the little parts about the other guys and how they helped Nick. And I'm glad that Brian is willing to give Nick some credits about the whole ghost story.
Author's Response: This is one of my favorite chapter, I almost cried writing this one. Thank you for the appreciation.
Date: 06/06/13 01:53 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Darkest Hour
I really loved this first chapter.
It goes strict to the point of Nick's secret, without giving too much detail but enough to interest the reader and to make him want to keep reading. One thing that I really liked is the fact that Nick doesn't love his power, especially because he doesn't allow him to protect and save his lover.
The sotry reminds me of "Ghost Whisperer" and that's a positive plus since I loved that show!
Good job!
Author's Response: Hey girl! Sorry for the late reply to your reviews, I was on a month vacation in the Philippines. I tried to spend all my time with the kids so I stayed away from the computer. Actually, I'm a big fan of ghost whisperer and maybe this story was a result of that. But the plot of the story started with Brian committing suicide and Nick will be able to see his ghost. Nick will try to find the answer why Brian committed suicide and help him cross over, but since I can't kill Brian, I just made him meet random ghost. Then, I realized it is so like the Ghost Whisperer. lol
Date: 05/05/13 04:43 pm Title: Chapter 33 - Morgue
Great chapter, Ritz! I like the twist at the end where the nurse was able to hear the ghost as well. Clever!
Author's Response: a very, very, very late response but Thank you, Mare. As always, your reviews make me smile and feel appreciated as a writer. :)
Date: 02/03/13 12:02 pm Title: Chapter 32 - First Time
Finally had a chance to read this chapter. You did a great job describing the hospital and how scary it was for Nick seeing the creepy nurse and not knowing which one was alive or dead. I'm very curious to know more about this poor John Doe. Thanks for the quick update, Ritz and sorry it took awhile for me to read it.
Author's Response: No need to say sorry, Mare. And Thank you for still reading this and sticking with me. If it weren't for you, I might not be able to pick up and continue this story. You will learn more about this case soon, I promise. :)
Date: 01/30/13 06:01 pm Title: Chapter 32 - First Time
Aw poor Nick, that's got to be tough being in a place where he's surrounded by them! And that nurse with the blood coming out of her mouth, no wonder he freaked! Will he help the un-named man or see Baylee though? Looking forward to more to see what happens next :)
Author's Response: Hi, Steph! he will finish the case of this un-named man before I bring the story to present time again. I think Michael is itching to appear. lol Thank you for reading and leaving review. :)
Date: 12/30/12 04:08 pm Title: Chapter 31 - Henrietta
All caught up and looking forward to more! Glad he's got Brian to talk to and that he believes him about it all now.
Author's Response: Thank you for still reading, Steph. :)
Date: 12/30/12 03:02 pm Title: Chapter - Traffic Lights
Sorry it's taken me so long to catch up Ritz, but still enjoying it and am curious what happened to Jake.
