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Reviewer: Mare Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/27/12 11:58 am Title: Chapter 31 - Henrietta

Aww what a heartbreaking story about Henrietta and her husband. I think i'll like her as Nick's new guardian. I'm glad you were able to re-write the chapter. I thought it was great! Thanks for the quck update too!



Author's Response: Sorry for the late response. I think you'll like Henrietta more as I will introduce her in the later chapter. Thanks for reading. Next chapter is halfway done, hope to post it by the 1st week of February. :)

Reviewer: Mare Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/23/12 12:34 pm Title: Chapter 30 - A day after funeral

Hey Ritz! Glad to see ypu updated. Honestly, it's been so long I had a hard time remembering what happened prior to this chapter, but then as I was reading it slowly started to come back. Great job describing the boyfriend's pain and how Nick felt losing Kate. I think i'll like this Henrietta ghost. Hopefully you won't let too much time lapse betwen updates! I always look forward to reading this story :O) Merry Christmas!



Author's Response: Hey, Mare! I know I suck in replying to review for the past months, I hope you always know how much I appreciate your reviews, and how happy I am knowing you still read my story. I'll try to update as soon as I can. The story is already finished in my head, but I can't find time to write. Baby Heath takes all my free time. lol Merry Christmas, Mare! Thank you for the constant support. :)

Reviewer: Mare Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/17/12 09:42 pm Title: Chapter - Traffic Lights

Yay for the update! I enjoyed this chapter, Ritz. I hope they are able to find Jake and I also like the fact that she did realize she was dead but also wasn't able to move out of where she was. Hope it doesn't take you 4 more months to give us a resolution to their story! LOL

Reviewer: Julilly Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/09/12 12:46 pm Title: Chapter 25 - George

I tried to figure out what was wrong with your chapter lineup that is making one. Halter show up blank but I couldn't. :/ should there have been a valentines day I before valentines day II?

Reviewer: Julilly Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/09/12 12:44 pm Title: Chapter 26 - Valentine's Day

Aww cute chapter

Reviewer: Julilly Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/09/12 12:42 pm Title: Chapter 24 - Mini Reunion

I found this chapter a little confusing, to be honest. I felt like a lot happened really quickly but that I wasn't 100% in the know about the who, what and why. It just felt a little jumpy and could use some more description between the dialogue to better set up the scene. 

Reviewer: Julilly Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/09/12 12:38 pm Title: Chapter 23 - Max, Debbie and the Light

Ruh-oh! How will he talk his way out of this one?!

Reviewer: Julilly Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/09/12 12:34 pm Title: Chapter 22 - Kaitlyn Jade Harris

Everything seemed normal until the end! What could this be about?!

Reviewer: Julilly Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/09/12 11:41 am Title: Chapter 21 - Mrs. Debbie Jenkins

I think that you're harder on your ability to describe things than you need to be. I think it would be valuable for you to practice descriptions rather than post pictures of what you mean. The reader doesn't always have to have the exact same image as you do. Your description of the earrings may have looked a little different in my head but at the root if it they would be pretty much the same. Let the reader use their imagination a bit, you don't have to describe every detail. 



Author's Response: Here is another rleview unanswered, what happened to me? Lol maybe I read your review in the office while I wasn't logged in, then I forgot to answer it at home. I'm really sorry, Julilly. What you said in this review helped me a lot. This is one piece of advice I will never forget. :)

Reviewer: Julilly Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/09/12 10:45 am Title: Chapter 20 - Earrings

Hmm. Now that's interesting. Good to see that he isnt ignoring people even though the ghosts are pretty invasive. Curious to see where this will go!



Author's Response: I'm sorry, Julilly. I thought I replied to all of your reviews before. I hope, despite not being able to reply to all of them, you know how much those reviews meant to me. :)

Reviewer: Purpura Lipstick Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/09/12 10:51 pm Title: Chapter 27 - Valentine's Day part 2

oh my gosh! how freaky ..! that would certainly scare me to have a ghost appear like that!!

What a sweet thing he did for the man though.  :) 

Reviewer: Tri Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/08/12 06:25 pm Title: Chapter 27 - Valentine's Day part 2

Yay - an update!! Great chapter... Can't wait to read about this new girl's story... Sounds pretty bad! :( Update soon.

Reviewer: Mare Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/08/12 12:13 pm Title: Chapter 27 - Valentine's Day part 2

Yay for an update! And boo for that cliffhanger! lol I'm glad Nick told that guy what his wife said about his diet, even though it made him angry. Nice job with this chapter, Ritz! 

Reviewer: Julilly Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/28/12 03:19 pm Title: Chapter 19 - Gary, Leo and the truth...

I'm surprised Leo was so receptive to the whole "I can see ghosts" thing. I woul be freaking out! Lol



Author's Response: I would be too! lol But Leo has been experiencing a lot of unexplainable things since the accident, so I guess it was easy for him to believe that Nick could see ghosts. Yay! You are almost caught up. Thank you! :)

Reviewer: Julilly Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/28/12 03:16 pm Title: Chapter 18 - Craziness should stop!

Why don't I remember this Lisa girl? Lol I must be forgetful in my old age. :P

I feel bad for Leo, he seems to be catching a lot of flack. He must think he is just having a really bad week when all along that ghost has been messing with him! Hopefully Nick can sort it out soon. 



Author's Response: Oooops... I think Mare said the same thing about Lisa. I should have introduced her instead of putting her in the story in that way. I must have confused everybody. Sorry about that. *blushes* :)