Date: 06/28/12 03:12 pm Title: Chapter 17 - Drugs and Sex
It sucks that the guys are thinking Nick is up to no good! He's just trying to do the right thing and everyone is jumping to conclusions!
Author's Response: Yes, but the guys are just trying to help. Nick's behavior has been odd since his birthday and they have no explanation for that. Thank you for reading.
Date: 06/28/12 03:09 pm Title: Chapter 16 - Leo
That's crazy! Who is this ghost? How did the roadie kill him and how can he move things with his mind?! This one is pretty interesting I can't wait to find out more about him.
Author's Response: Thank you for still reading, Julilly. I am sure by this time you know the story about Gary and Leo. :)
Date: 06/25/12 11:58 pm Title: Chapter 25 - George
Hey Ritz! I'm on here grabbing your chapters to add to my site (I was a few chapters behind) and noticed there's no Chapter 26. Chapter 25 is showing up as posted twice in the table of contents, and when I click Next to go to 26, it brings up a blank page. It's probably just an AC glitch; I was just wondering if it showed up correctly for you or if you could try re-posting Chapter 26. Just wanted to let you know!
Author's Response: Hi Julie, thanks for pointing that out. I honestly don't know how to fix it. Same thing happens to me, if I click next from the 1st chap 25, it will show up blank page. But if I click both chapters 25 from the chapter menu page, it both contains the story. I am afraid I will delete the correct one and loose the reviews. when I uploaded chapter 26, it became chapter 27. I'll try to fix this before uploading the next chapter. Thank you. :)
Date: 06/25/12 05:40 pm Title: Chapter 15 - That was close!
I have a confession. I should have been reviewing but I got sucked into the story and got so involved that I kept pushing "next chapter" without thinking! I hope that goes to show how much I am enjoying it. It's definitely interesting now that Michael is seemingly out to get Nick. I'm anxious to see where that goes!
Author's Response: Now, that's more flattering. Glad to know you like the story, and I thought you stopped reading because it wasnt interesting enough. lol Thank you soooo much! :)
Date: 06/25/12 12:58 pm Title: Chapter 26 - Valentine's Day
Lol very nice job, Nick. Now he's starting to think he's Superman! And yay! I'm all caught up!
Author's Response: Yay! but now that you're all caught up I have to give you something to read.... lol thank you, Mare, for sticking with this story for sooo long. :)
Date: 06/25/12 12:53 pm Title: Chapter 25 - George
Since I have time, I'm playing catch up on some stories. Loved the backstory on Michael and why he is so mean. Hopefully the other three can keep Nick safe!
Author's Response: Oh, Mare, how I miss your reviews.... lol. thank you for still reading. I'll keep my promise to you and update soooon. :)
Date: 06/05/12 11:59 am Title: Chapter 4 - First Mission..... Part 1
Hmm, interesting. I wonder what it was about age 25 that triggered all this! Also, aside from a couple little things, you'd never know that English was not your first language! It's really great Ritz!
Author's Response: Awww, thank you so much, Julilly. :)
Date: 06/05/12 02:15 am Title: Chapter 1 - Darkest Hour
Wow! Off to an intense start, right into the drama. It's funny we ended up with each other considering the parallels between our stories. I have a feeling I'm really going to like this one! :)
Author's Response: Now, I understand what you meant about the parallels between our stories. :) I am loving your story, too and having fun with the ghost Nick. Thank you, Julilly. :)
Author's Response: Now, I understand what you meant about the parallels between our stories. :) I am loving your story, too and having fun with the ghost Nick. Thank you, Julilly. :)
Date: 04/26/12 08:00 pm Title: Chapter 26 - Valentine's Day
Aww those flowers sound really nice and I'm sure they will like them.
The grilled sandwich is better for him, but the cakes sounds delicious!
Author's Response: most women loves flowers. the cupcakes are sooo yummy. I could almost picture it in my mind while writing. lol Thank you, Steph.
Date: 04/23/12 05:36 pm Title: Chapter 26 - Valentine's Day
Ooo... I'm anxious to find out more about Nick and Kate's romance as it blossoms. :) Great chapter!
Author's Response: thank you for the review, girly. :)
Date: 04/21/12 11:46 am Title: Chapter 24 - Mini Reunion
Aw now we know who is trying to harm Nick although I have to say I don't remember who Grace is lol but that's just me and my crappy memory. Great job as usual Ritz! Also glad to see that you have been updating the story!
Date: 04/21/12 11:43 am Title: Chapter 23 - Max, Debbie and the Light
I'm glad both Debbie and Max made it into the light. I enjoyed Max. I think so far he's been my favorite ghost of yours.
Date: 04/21/12 11:39 am Title: Chapter 22 - Kaitlyn Jade Harris
Aww, lol I love that he ontroduced himself as Nickolas, it was very endearing. Sorry I fell so behind, on this story. You know I still love it. :O) Onto the next chapter.
Date: 04/18/12 04:46 pm Title: Chapter 26 - Valentine's Day
ah that was so swee, flowers for Kate and helping a ghost at the same time, a non violent ghost at that. so sweet!
Author's Response: Nickolas can be pretty romantic sometimes. Thanks, Lore. :)
Date: 03/27/12 08:40 pm Title: Chapter 25 - George
I suppose I can understand why Michael is bitter, but making others unhappy is just wrong and I hope Nick can stop him! Good to see you back Ritz :)
Author's Response: Rest assured Nick will do everything to stop Michael. thank you for the review, Steph and sorry for the super late reply. :)