Date: 10/04/11 05:24 am Title: Chapter 9
Oh no!! 1 step forward - 2 steps back! I'm ready for some Nick and Eden nookie! :) I can really feel Eden's passion for Nick! I love it! Update soon!
Author's Response: Nick and Eden are dancing around each other. You will be getting some nookie very very soon.
Date: 10/04/11 04:46 am Title: Chapter 9
OMG; I'm loving the story so far (: What an amazing job! I can't wait for more
Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad you are enjoying it.
Date: 10/04/11 03:16 am Title: Chapter 9
ugh..thats not what i wanted to hear..i wanted a breakup..evil laughs..dang he said himself he felt nothin no reason to keep holdin on ...
Author's Response: I know...I didn't want to hear him say it either. I think he wants to get away to truly see what his feelings for Sarah are. Deep down I think Nick has no feelings for Sarah, but they've been together for almost five years. He may feels it's easier to be with her instead of being alone. Thanks for reading.
Date: 10/04/11 03:04 am Title: Chapter 9
Ok I am starting to not like Eden. I can see falling for Nick but she is deliberately hurting Sarah. WHos knows love? Strange. Keep up the great work.
Marguerite
Author's Response: I love getting reviews when you don't love how a character acts. Eden is self absorbed when it comes to the whole Nick thing. She's so young and has never been in love before this. Eden isn't thinking about Sarah because she is so wrapped up in herself. This is where age and maturity becomes an issue.
Date: 10/02/11 03:57 pm Title: Chapter 8
oh hell yes my fav chapter so far.! I love that they are finally realizinghow the other makes them so happy..I feel bad for nick the one time he technically didn't cheat in a *story plotline* he gets blamed for it..I dont think i could put up with sarah..its nice that nick is with someone who has careert goals but if she puts her career before everyting she can't expeact to have a relationship with anyone ...nick deserves better and i think eden would be perfect for the job..lol!
Author's Response: I'm so happy you loved this chapter. Yes, it's a slow process for them to realize that they care for one another as more than just a friend. Nick is being a good guy for once and Sarah is just being rude to him. Nick and Eden have something special between them. I hope that in blooms into a real love.
Date: 09/30/11 06:38 pm Title: Chapter 1
I so love it! The drama unfolds *insert crescedoing music here*:p Great update!
Author's Response: Glad you're loving it. The drama is only starting. Way more drama to come.
Date: 09/30/11 03:48 pm Title: Chapter 8
Love this update please update some more great stories.
Author's Response: Glad you are loving the story. Update coming soon.
Date: 09/30/11 09:55 am Title: Chapter 8
So...trouble begins! ;) More, more, more haha
Author's Response: Yes, the trouble is starting. It's going to get even better.
Date: 09/30/11 07:42 am Title: Chapter 8
Oh lord and the trouble starts. I kind of feel sorry for Sarah in a way. But those two do belong together. Keep up the excellent work.
Marguerite
Author's Response: Yes trouble is brewing. I feel bad for Sarah, but she's totally pushing him towards Eden. Thanks for reading.
Date: 09/30/11 05:04 am Title: Chapter 8
cant wait for more! do you just update once a week or just whenever you get a chance?
Author's Response: Glad you are enjoying the story. I try to update at least twice a week. I don't have set days due to my crazy schedule.
Date: 09/30/11 04:53 am Title: Chapter 8
Oh I think Carter's going to be opening his eyes soon! GREAT chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks. It's coming soon. I promise.
Date: 09/29/11 11:03 pm Title: Chapter 7
It's killing me :) They need to get together soooon! Can't wait to see what happens when Daddy-O finds out!
Author's Response: It will happen soon. I'm sure daddy will not be happy. Thanks for reading.
Date: 09/28/11 03:30 am Title: Chapter 7
oh man oh man..she's so in love i'm ready for them to be together and i think that he doesnt love sarah as much as he thinks i think he is comfortable with their relationship and cares to much of her to break her heart but i dont think he is just head over heels for her ..maybe at one time but not anymore..if he was he wouldn't already be thinking these things about eden and wouldn't go to her every single time sarah wasn't around he's fallin and doesn't even know it yet..please update soon!!!
Author's Response: Thanks for reading. You've hit the nail on the head. Things will be happening soon.
Date: 09/27/11 10:38 am Title: Chapter 7
Great update. I hope things bring them a lot closer. I can't wait til they finally kiss.maybe sleep together . Love this story I hope she get what she wants from Nick and I hope he gives it to her. Please update soon.
Author's Response: Only time will tell. I promise things are going to get juicer and juicer. Thanks for reading.
Date: 09/27/11 04:37 am Title: Chapter 7
I could handle being in bed with Nick like that right now. :) LOVE this chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks! I would love to cuddle up with him.
