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Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/27/11 04:17 am Title: Chapter 7

Oh poor Nick he needs a relationship and it appears his one with Sarah isn't working. And Eden is so much like her dad. Very independent. I hope all of them find happiness.
Marguerite

Author's Response: Sarah is a workohlic. Nick is just starting to realize things aren't working. Eden is definitely her dad. I believe in happy endings. Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: Simple Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/27/11 04:13 am Title: Chapter 7

men are so clueless. it's like you have to spell it out for them or something. nice job!

Author's Response: Yes, I think Eden needs to be like, "Hey Nick, I like you." Then she should kiss him. Maybe then he will get it...lol.

Reviewer: tiggerc128 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/25/11 06:20 am Title: Chapter 1

I'll take very good care of his putter!!  OMG, did I say that??



Author's Response: You dirty girl you...lmao. Yes, you did say that!!!!

Reviewer: PaulaKTBPA Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/24/11 05:53 pm Title: Chapter 6

First time we hear Nick about Eden in a different way....This is gonna be goooood ;)

Author's Response: It was nice to get a glimpse of what Nick was thinking about Eden during the golf lesson. Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: tiggerc128 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/24/11 06:37 am Title: Chapter 6

I think I need Nick to teach me how to play golf.  Putt Putt.  Whatever!  :)  LOVE IT!



Author's Response: Yes, golf lessons from Nick would be a lot of fun. LOL!

Reviewer: freezenik001 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/23/11 11:28 am Title: Chapter 6

Scandalous Eden she is such a bad girl. Nick is going to lose it soon and have his way with her. Great update please update some more it is getting steamy. I hope they kiss soon.



Author's Response: Glad you're enjoying it. Eden is enjoying every minute of it! It's going to get steamier.

Reviewer: Alexsgirl_ritz Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/23/11 09:03 am Title: Chapter 6

Damn! Eden is such a tease.... Poor Nicky for being so confused. lol

Author's Response: Eden is having a lot of fun teasing Nick....lol

Reviewer: AJBrianFan Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/23/11 03:28 am Title: Chapter 6

Nick is feeding into this, haha. Can't wait for more.

Author's Response: Yes, but he doesn't even realize it...lol.

Reviewer: Kaos_Carter Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/23/11 03:26 am Title: Chapter 6

yikes , I would love for nick to show me how to swing a golf club..hehe personally im not interested in golf but for that man i would play for hours!~ update soon please it just keeps getting better!

 



Author's Response: I agree with you!!! Golf would be fun with him. :-)

Reviewer: bsbgurl_1990 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/23/11 02:02 am Title: Chapter 6

if and when nick and eden get together which im sure they will eventually i am dying to know how aj will react. lol. btw, i am loving the story cant wait for another update!

Author's Response: I can't wait for AJ's reaction either. I'm sure he won't be happy...lol. Glad you are loving the story. Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: Negris Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/23/11 01:58 am Title: Chapter 6

"Nick was skinny, he had a cushiony ass" maybee 17 years from now he may gat his ass back ... i miss those days

Author's Response: Got to love his ass...lol

Reviewer: Simple Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/23/11 01:48 am Title: Chapter 6

Nick really needs to come out of that state of denial he's in

Author's Response: Ya, think! LOL! Mean are soooo clueless...hee hee.

Reviewer: PaulaKTBPA Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/22/11 11:51 am Title: Chapter 5

She is such a rebel and I love it haha.

Author's Response: I love Eden. She is so fun to write. Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: Alexsgirl_ritz Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/22/11 08:23 am Title: Chapter 5

awww Eden is teasing the hell out of Nick. I love it when Nick becomes so protective. :)

Author's Response: Eden loves getting to Nick. He's always been protective of her.

Reviewer: tiggerc128 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/22/11 04:35 am Title: Chapter 5

OH I LOVE the attitude she gives him!!  AWESOME work!



Author's Response: Eden loves to dish it out...lol. She gets that from her mom. :-)