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Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/28/12 07:55 am Title: Chapter 9

WOW. Ok seriously Paris Hilton can go die in a ditch. Nick needs an ass kicking. Omg this made me so damn mad. Shithead. He's a dick.

Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/27/12 02:09 am Title: Chapter 5

That was hot! I think it is so funny when moments of passion get interrupted like that. Reading on....

Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/27/12 12:48 am Title: Chapter 4

Ok from what I've read so far, Nick's obviously usually a playboy but maybe he is different with a girl he really has feelings for. I'm surprised he respected her wishes like that. Whitney is a smart girl. Loving this so far, I'm gonna continue reading.

Reviewer: freezenik001 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/26/12 11:16 am Title: Chapter 20

Great update but I have a feeling that Lauren is behind this. I hope Nick finds out and dump her ass. Please update soon.

Reviewer: kevmylove Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/26/12 06:50 am Title: Chapter 4

Oh no Whitney that's nothing but trouble. But who can resist those blue eyes and kissing that man.

Reviewer: kevmylove Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/26/12 06:31 am Title: Chapter 3

Well that Nick thinks he can have whoever he wants. Apparently, not Whitney!

Reviewer: tiggerc128 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/26/12 06:06 am Title: Chapter 20

OH Nick is SO SCREWED!!!  Bet Lauren tipped them off!!  GREAT chapter!! ~ D

Reviewer: riotgurl3278 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/26/12 05:20 am Title: Chapter 20

Oh wow! I am speechless.

Reviewer: Tri Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/26/12 04:37 am Title: Chapter 20

Oh shit! Things just got crazy in this chapter. It was already complicated, obviously, but wow! I really can't wait for more now... Great chapter! Update soon. :)

Reviewer: michxxblc Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/26/12 04:32 am Title: Chapter 20

OMG. Nick is such a dick! How is he gonna be telling her to have common sense when he clearly doesn't have any since he was playing with Jackson OUT in the open. Ugh. I really hope Nick gets some common sense of his own & they get to the bottom of this. Shit is about to go DOOOOOWN. LOVE it! 

Reviewer: MrsCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/25/12 04:53 pm Title: Chapter 19

EWWW LAUREN lol ok nick dump her already and be with ur babies mama ur family needs you.

:)

Reviewer: rachel21 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/25/12 03:31 am Title: Chapter 19

Damnit Lauren! LOL Yay for an update. I'm so glad Nick finally met Jackson. Great update! Can't wait to see what you have in store girlie. :)

Reviewer: michxxblc Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/24/12 10:53 pm Title: Chapter 19

LOVE THIS STORY! Please keep on updating!

P.S - (That sex scene at the club was HOTTTTT! ;) )

Reviewer: freezenik001 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/23/12 03:53 pm Title: Chapter 19

Great update I really hope nick and whitney work this out. Nick dumping lauren.

Reviewer: riotgurl3278 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/23/12 11:24 am Title: Chapter 19

I don't know who I feel worse for Nick or Whitney,Things are such a mess and so complicated since there's Jackson's illness,Lauren and the new baby involved in all of this but then you add the fact that Nick and Whitney are clearly still drawn to each other into all of it and it's just so heartbreaking.Sure, Jackson is the most important thing right now but Whitney also needs to worry about her health and health of her unborn child and the stress of what she feels for Nick and the custody issues and his relationship,Or the end of his relationship with Lauren,has got to be on her mind,It's all just alot for them all to take and Though it's nice to know that Nick and Jackson have taken to each other pretty well in the middle of all of it.I just hope it all works out and in the end they can all be happy,healthy and whether Nick and Whitney are together or not,A family.
Sorry for the long speech but I am loving this story and I have had alot to say about it for a long time but for some reason didnt review.That'll change now I promise lol.Great Job! Great Chapter!P.S.I hope whatever the issue with your computer was it is resolved. :) Update soon I hope!

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