Date: 03/23/12 05:36 am Title: Chapter 19
I still LOVE this story!! I've been missing it! I hope things are working out with your computer. and I REALLY hope Nick and Whitney fall in love again. Great chapter! ~ D
Author's Response:
Date: 03/23/12 05:22 am Title: Chapter 19
I was sooo happy to see an update for this story! :) I think that even though Nick and Whitney's relationship is strained, there's still something there that won't ever go away and will only be maintained by the connection they'll share through their children. I'm anxious to see where everything leads... With the new baby, Jackson, Lauren, and the Legos! Update soon. Great job! :)
Author's Response:
Date: 02/07/12 06:30 am Title: Chapter 18
Wow...incredibly full chapter! I absolutely loved it. Even though they're working things out, it's getting so complicated. I really do feel bad for Lauren, but I really want Nick and Whitney to figure things out for Jackson's best interest. Can't wait to see where you go with it! Please update soon!
Date: 02/07/12 06:20 am Title: Chapter 18
Wow! At least they came up with an agreement. I hope things work out for Jackson. He is what is truly important.
Date: 02/07/12 06:13 am Title: Chapter 18
oh SO good. Lauren needs to be mad at Nick. He DID cheat, after all. LOL Great chapter!! ~D
Date: 01/12/12 04:24 am Title: Chapter 17
Awesome chapter! Can't wait to see what happens next
Date: 01/05/12 12:54 am Title: Chapter 17
I feel bad for Whit, but I feel bad for Nick, too. I wish they could come together to help Jackson. It doesn't look like that will happen without some major drama. Great chapter.
Date: 01/04/12 02:40 pm Title: Chapter 17
Good for her I know I suppose to feel sympathy for her but I don't you never wait until a child get sick then call the father that doesn't know him for five years think it is going to be okay. Great story.
Date: 01/04/12 11:27 am Title: Chapter 17
Uggg nick u ass that's the last thing u need to do how about helping to save ur sons life first! Can't visit a child that is dead now can u.
I see why he did it but he should get tested first and make sure he can save his sons life.
Date: 01/04/12 08:43 am Title: Chapter 17
Didn't see Nick filing for joint custody coming, but it was a good move. Love the story!
Date: 01/04/12 07:57 am Title: Chapter 17
This girl's an idiot seriously. For all the crap she just laid on him and then seeing someone else while she's with his 2nd kid that she finagled somehow, that's the least Nick should be allowed to have...what did she expect? And then blabbing the whole story to boot? Sorry, but don't feel bad for her in the slightest, just had to say.
Date: 01/04/12 07:05 am Title: Chapter 17
Ohhh boy... GREAT CHAPTER! I loved it. :) I figured the visitation thing was coming, but damn... That's gotta be tough to deal with. Nick's gotta be going through a lot with all of the new information, but it does suck that she gets served without any communication from him. It's good that she has Donnie to depend on, but I wonder if/how that's going to blow up when Nick finds out... Eesh! Can't wait for more. Update soon!!
Author's Response:
Thanks :) was glad to see your update as well! They'll be communicating soon - stay tuned :)
Date: 01/03/12 09:19 pm Title: Chapter 16
Hey i've been reading this story for the past week or so and it's great, I feel so much for Whitney and for Jackson ofcourse but with that last chapter I feel so sorry for Nick and what he's missed out on and not only that but what he brought up about his family, its was a nice touch and i really enjoy reading this.
I don't even know if you realised you slipped a backstreet lyric in at the end their or not haha
anybody's guess... i try to go on like i never knew you i'm awake but my world is half asleep.
I did actually sing it to as the chapter ended haha
Author's Response:
Haha!! Thank you so much for the review! I'm glad you are enjoying it! I love that you caught the last line. It was actually subconscious - LOL! When I reread to edit - I was like OMG!! Ha! Can't believe I did that - but I thought it fit so I kept it!
Date: 01/03/12 05:51 am Title: Chapter 16
Nick has every reason to be mad. I feel bad for him. I hope things work out for for Jackson's sake.
Author's Response:
Yeah he does have a reason to be mad, but it just reached a point with Whitney of no going back. Until now - we'll see what happens... ;) Thanks for reviewing :)
Date: 01/03/12 04:37 am Title: Chapter 16
I wish that she had stay and her and Nick would have talk it out . He might be angry with her. She sid kept him from his son for 7 years. He does have a right to get angry at her . His right to have a father she doesn't have a right to take it away from. Even though the mess he made she still should have told him don't wait for his son to be diagnosed with something. She is being selfish. I know that she will be hearing from Nick's lawyers.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and reviewing :) We'll see what happens...
