Date: 10/12/11 11:31 pm Title: Chapter 3: Our on-line encounter
You did good! You added the colour and flavour it needed! :D I thoroughly enjoyed it!
Date: 10/12/11 12:20 am Title: Chapter 3: Our on-line encounter
I could see this happening! awesome!
Date: 10/10/11 11:13 pm Title: Chapter 3: Our on-line encounter
It was good and I'm totally sure about it, that it'll get better. Xoxo
Date: 10/10/11 11:08 pm Title: Chapter 2: How I first met Nick
Really like the beginning of this story, keep it up. Xoxo
Date: 10/05/11 04:20 am Title: Chapter 2: How I first met Nick
I liked this she was smart enough to act normal not crazy & he noticed. Now for more. keep up the good work. I like this,.
Marguerite
Author's Response:
Im so glad you like this. Thank you for reading!
Date: 10/05/11 03:59 am Title: Chapter 2: How I first met Nick
Well...since you said critic...you forgot an S when you went to say the others watched you only said Other.
Other than that, I think its great!!! :D So great!
Author's Response:
fixed, thank you!
Date: 10/05/11 03:56 am Title: Chapter 2: How I first met Nick
hahaha lame SN Carter! Love it all! Awaiting the next update!
Date: 10/05/11 03:56 am Title: Chapter 2: How I first met Nick
hahaha lame SN Carter! Love it all! Awaiting the next update!
Author's Response:
Honestly, a very long time ago on some fan site I read this was Aaron's aim name. LOL!
Date: 10/01/11 11:25 pm Title: Chapter 1: Allow me to introduce myself
Kick ass start! I really enjoyed it! I'm curious for more! :)
Date: 10/01/11 11:24 pm Title: Chapter 1: Allow me to introduce myself
Oooh very intereting start!! I love it!! I can't wait for an update!! :)
Date: 10/01/11 06:42 am Title: Chapter 1: Allow me to introduce myself
SO far I like it. Sounds original & interesting. Keep it up.
Marguerite
Author's Response:
Thank you very much Marguerite!
Date: 10/01/11 05:38 am Title: Chapter 1: Allow me to introduce myself
Check your 7th line. Good start.
