Reviews For Up The River
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Reviewer: RokofAges75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/16/11 06:54 pm Title: Chapter 1

Whoa! This one was really different from the other stories I've read for this challenge. It was definitely suspenseful, and lots of twists and turns to keep me guessing! The ending was killer!! Way to leave us hanging like that, wondering if any of them survived LOL. Awesome job, Jen!

Reviewer: Mare Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/14/11 12:50 am Title: Chapter 1

Welll, I completely heard "Dueling Banjos" while reading this story lol And you shot Kevin! Ugh! Poor Kevin! Great job Jen. Loved the suspense and the cliffy at the end!

Reviewer: Carter-Orange Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/13/11 11:14 am Title: Chapter 1

Kind of reminds me of the film 'Without A Paddle' lol.  Enjoyed that Jen :)

Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/13/11 08:25 am Title: Chapter 1

This reminded me of that movie The River Wild....I like it a lot....wish you hadn't ended it like that though lol. Great job!

Reviewer: BSBfan4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/13/11 05:36 am Title: Chapter 1

I enjoyed it, I hope they made it ok.

Reviewer: Simple Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/13/11 04:30 am Title: Chapter 1

Love, Love , LOVED it!

Author's Response:

Thank you!! And thanks for taking the time to read and  review!

Reviewer: rebellious_one Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/13/11 03:58 am Title: Chapter 1

Wow. This was really different!! I loved how us three (you, me and Rose) wrote in Nick's POV, lol. But I liked this response, it was a different and interesting idea! And damn you Kevin, you should've kept your mouth shut! If anything, AJ would have been the one to blurt that out, lol.

But man, that was a suspenseful ending! Did they live or die?! Why'd you have to end it like this, WHY?!? Lol. Great job Jennay!! :)



Author's Response:

Thanks Doc! I'm so happy you liked it!  It is funny we all wrote from Nick's POV but I find it so easy to do it that way.  And maybe you're right, it shoulda been AJ.  Now I have another way it shoulda went in my head..lol. 

 

And that was one of the rules!! It was a SUSPENSE..:P  And this coming from one of the cliffhanger queens! haha!! 

 

Thanks for reading and reviewing Doc..it means a lot to me!

Reviewer: Purpura Lipstick Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/13/11 02:27 am Title: Chapter 1

LOL that was great! But I have to ask, what's with Kevin going first.. Rose had hers leave off with a chain saw over Kevin and yours has Kevin get shot....  phsaw... great job though. Loved it.  Love how it ends with them all in midair as they fall... :)



Author's Response:

That was total coincidence.  Kevin is just the "brave one" in my eyes so he'd be the one to say something. 

 

Thanks for reading and reviewing!! :)