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Reviewer: kevmylove Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/27/12 08:01 pm Title: Chapter 39

WTF?!? I coulda sworn I reviewed this last chapter. Ugh...damn iPod. Well here we go again. I'm gla that Kevin and Julie got to be happy together, I still feel bad for Nick tho. Lore you are one Twisted woman how dare you leave is hanging like that. I mean Zoe is Twssa or Teasa is Zoe. Sadly I think we will never know.

Yay you finished another story!! I really enjoyed it and I'm sorry I was such a crappy reader on this one. So much going on lately. I miss ya by the way!!

Author's Response:

Sure you reviewed, you are just trying to cover your butt ;p  Yes Kevin and Julie so happy together *sings* ... yes I am very twisted, you obviously do not remember other stories I have written, but do you think I would leave you hanging that badly?  pshaw. 

Yes another story finished, now if I could get motivated to write any of my other stories as well as the collaboration. :)  Thanks for reviewing Erika!!

Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/26/12 04:41 am Title: Chapter 39

WTF Lore lol. Sorry I have been a bad reader :( I did enjoy this story while it was being updated. I just got caught up and I like how you ended it but there's a lot that I question. Great story :)

Author's Response:

Yes I know I ended this with a BIG question and ... well that just might get answered.... *whistles*  I'd been plotting this as the end for a while when I realized it would be too much to put into this story alone. Thanks for reading and reviewing Tracy!

Reviewer: Carter-Orange Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/22/12 07:16 pm Title: Chapter 39

Yay, congrats on finishing Lore!  But you left it on a bit of a cliffhanger with Zoe/Tessa.  Wonder what happened there?

Poor Brian, losing the use of his legs :(  He's just like Professor Xavier off the X Men now, hehehe.

I'm glad Julie is now cured though and she and Kevin can be happy together.  

Really loved this story, very unique!



Author's Response:

Yes, I can't IMAGINE why I would leave a cliffhanger at the END of a story *gasps* LOL.  

Thanks for reading the story and reviewing all the chapters. I really looked forward to your feedback every update! 

Reviewer: kevmylove Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/21/12 06:19 am Title: Chapter 38

Oh wow!!! So poor Brian had an accident while jumping. Jessica was nuts. Nick and Julie are no longer connected (supposedly) now I believe she just jumped again. Darn it update soon!! I need to know.



Author's Response:

Jessica was nuts! I am sad I didn't get to use her more but it was hard to shove her in there with everything else going on! LOL.  Only one more chapter to go until the end! :) Thanks for the review Erika.

Reviewer: Carter-Orange Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/20/12 08:37 pm Title: Chapter 38

So I couldn't wait until later and had to read on my phone :) loved it Lore, I'm glad the tie between Nick and Julie has been cut, she can be happy with Kevin now but I do feel sorry for Nick a bit. Wonder where Julie is off to now? Can't wait to see!



Author's Response:

I love that you couldn't wait. Makes me happy.  Thanks so much for reading it Steph.  The tie is broken yes but it seems Nick still feels the same, hrm?  I don't think Julie is going anywhere but we shall see... the end is only one chapter away.  Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: kevmylove Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/17/12 06:53 am Title: Chapter 37

Holy crap which of the hotties is a goner. Hopefully neither one of them...*bites nails* this is at it's peak. eeeek!



Author's Response:

I know, BOTH jumped in front to save her! AW they BOTH care about her. heehee you didn't get THAT from it? You just want to know who is dead? geesh. I have been bad about posting the next chapter... *whistles*  Thanks for the review Erika.

Reviewer: kevmylove Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/17/12 06:45 am Title: Chapter 36

OH crap I don't know what I thought when he pulled out the gun, but then I remembered that's how he had been helped. LOL!! I was in a panic for a sec.



Author's Response:

I am just trigger happy. :)  In the ORIGINAL version of any of the stories, AJ was supposed to die completely.  BUT I had a change of heart and this is what came of it. *sigh* ... Though I still might kill him just for good measure. Thanks for the review Erika.

Reviewer: Carter-Orange Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/13/12 07:07 pm Title: Chapter 37

So Charles is Steph's dad?  No wonder no harm would come to him then.  Shame AJ got a note back to warn Jessica.  I wonder who she shot?

Can't wait to see!



Author's Response:

Yah, that sort of just came out when I was writing and it stuck.  Makes you wonder how Charles had enough of a social life to have a child huh? But yah, he'd be pretty safe with his daughter, she may be rebelling against him and his ways but she doesn't want to hurt him.  

Yah, AJ and his damn note!! here I go shooting people at the very end again. LOL Thanks for the review Steph.

Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/10/12 09:59 am Title: Chapter 36

Just got caught up again. I am so sorry, usually I'm not this bad with reviewing but I've been sick and haven't read much. Great so far....this chapter had me on edge lol loved it!

Author's Response:

Stuff comes up, I'm not worried Tracy.  Thanks so much for catching up, it means a lot that you are sticking with it and leaving a review.  I try to leave chapters hanging, or at least with Chronos stories I've been doing that.  I only have 3 chapters left to post, I hope you enjoy the end. :)

Reviewer: Carter-Orange Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/09/12 10:57 pm Title: Chapter 36

So glad AJ and Erika were all for it, hope they are happy in the future now that they can't go meddling.

I don't like modern art either, it's like something a toddler could do as far as I can see, lol.

Great chapter Lore :)



Author's Response:

Yah...my original AJ plan was quite cruel... when CP started he wasnt going to live. :( I am so mean I KNOW!!!  but the story progressed and he lived and even got a girl! LOL. 

The Denver Art Muesum is really like that!!! you walk into the modern art building and there is a ROPE so that you don't fall as you walk because of the walls.  There are also lights on the bottom of the floor so you follow a straight line. So many people walk crooked and fall over in there... it's sick (and not in a good way).

Thanks for the review Steph.

Reviewer: Carter-Orange Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/08/12 12:34 pm Title: Chapter 35

I wonder if they'll catch him, and if so send them to a place without the ability to travel.

Loved it Lore!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review Steph!  I have a feeling they will catch him... oh wait...  ;)

Reviewer: kevmylove Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/08/12 08:40 am Title: Chapter 35

I'm glad that ERika trusted Julie again, but I dunno things are still fishy. I thought she was questioning Julie about NIck cause Kevin was overhearing. I wonder if she will ever tell him? Hmmm...



Author's Response:

She did tell him that something went on between them, that she seemed connected. Technically they didn't actually do anything ... much *whistles*  I don't know why you think things won't work out how I lay them out... what makes you think I'll change directions on you.. geesh. :)  Thanks for the review Erika.

Reviewer: kevmylove Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/08/12 08:32 am Title: Chapter 34

Oh lord...NICK!!! I will love you!

That was sweet of him to help her save Kevin. Sometimes I wonder if he is still bad tho.



Author's Response:

I think it will always be a question if Nick has a hidden agenda... just because of what happened before.  It was sweet of Nick to go back and save Kevin.  *sigh*  Even if it tore him up to do it.  Thanks for the review Erika.

Reviewer: kevmylove Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/08/12 08:29 am Title: Chapter 33

Well...make me bad why don't ya! Although for a bit I was starting to believe Erika...duuuh! Aw that moment with KEvin and Julie was sad and romantic at the same time. *sigh*



Author's Response:

did I actually acheive romantic and not sappy?? LOL that would be a first!  Yes, that conversation was planned so far in advance! And yes, yes you are evil too.  Can't believe you'd kill Kevin!! You bastard! lol ;)  thanks for the review Erika.

Reviewer: Alexsgirl_ritz Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/08/12 06:10 am Title: Chapter 35

now i understand why nick wanted to hurt AJ then so bad.... but Julie was right that was so cruel to let the Romans kill my love. Julie is so damn good at negotiations.... i hope erika is really cooperating. being forgiven to everything she and aj did plus they would be together in a future time is a good deal.

Author's Response:

well Nick wasn't exactly nice when they met but something in him seems to have changed!  thanks for the review Ritz.