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Reviewer: Carter-Orange Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/07/12 09:20 pm Title: Chapter 34

So Erika was a sneaky one from the start!!  Didn't expect that!  

So glad Nick found a way to save Kevin though, he couldn't die, especially not when he's alive in the future.

Great chapter Lore :)



Author's Response:

Yes ... sneaky from the start.  so see I made YOU BOTH bad ;) lol.  I'm glad Nick saved Kevin too, lol.  Not only because he's alive in the future but maybe this will help mend the relationship between Nick and Kevin and maybe the rest of the team?  Thanks for the review Steph.

Reviewer: Alexsgirl_ritz Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/07/12 09:48 am Title: Chapter 34

Oh, Nickolas... you poor little baby. :( I'm glad Kevin is alive but my heart breaks for you.

Author's Response:

Yes it is somewhat sad that Nick's heart is broken, again! But yes Kevin, alive! *sigh* I love my Kevin.  And.. have yet to officially kill him off in a story ... that might be a challenge for me to do one day, to kill him off.

Reviewer: Carter-Orange Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/05/12 06:54 pm Title: Chapter 33

So it was Erika and AJ after all!  And they left them there to die, how cruel is that.  Julie and Kevin's final words were so sweet and touching though and I'm glad Nick came to the rescue.  I wonder if he goes back for Kevin or how Kevin gets out of there.



Author's Response:

Yes, it really was them. No sneakiness now... You'd  think AJ would owe her a little more than removing the gag from Kevin's mouth so they can talk ...   I know I got all sappy with their final words and like I told Ritz, I had these words written long ago and just now got to use them.   I think Nick lost them and was just trying to find her, am not sure if he knew they were drowning, or did he? Thanks for the review Steph.

Reviewer: Alexsgirl_ritz Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/05/12 08:44 am Title: Chapter 33

Awww this chapter is one of the best! full of emotions... I hate it when I'm being biased ( i'm not sure if that's the right word) you know that I'll understand Erika when she say this, and I'll be on Julie's side when I read her counter attack, then I'd be on Erika's again, and to Julie... I understand them both until Erika has to be the evil one.... and a chapter full of love.... in pearl harbor nonetheless... I can't wait for the next chapter. Kevin has to be alive...

Author's Response:

Thanks for your review Ritz.  I know it's hard to hate Erika for what she is doing, she has her reasons and they aren't necessairly bad reasons. Just like with Nick in the first one, changing history isn't really a horrible thing for them to want to do, it's the extras that make them bad. Like trying to kill Julie and Kevin... lol.  I've had the words spoken for this scene since I started Chronos Project.  I never got around to using them in that story so I got to use them here.  Thanks again for the review!

Reviewer: Alexsgirl_ritz Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/05/12 05:49 am Title: Chapter 32

AJ and Erika? My love is the one behind this with his sneaky fiancee? Tsk... and why does Julie kept on insisting Justin and Tessa while Nick was so damn sure it wasn't them? But I agree with Julie... AJ and Erika were there to change something not major... maybe to tell someone to get off the Arizona ship so he won't die? and poor Nicky... he still got some feelings left for Julie....

Author's Response:

I know right? I threw the suspicion on Tessa and Justin pretty hard, there are reasons Nicky doesn't think it's them and yes that will be revealed... but you can't change the attack the day it's happening, that is a major event!  Possibly getting someone off the shit. LOL.  Yes, Nick seems to be hurting pretty bad about Julie choosing Kevin.

Reviewer: Alexsgirl_ritz Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/05/12 05:43 am Title: Chapter 31

Wow! Way to go, Julie.... but poor Brian if he was doing this against his will... and I had to LOL at Steph... 1 point for her for switching water into alcohol...

Author's Response:

who knows what is going on with Brian....oh right, I do. LOL.  Steph is a crafty one! LOL. Thanks for the review Ritz.

Reviewer: Basilia Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/05/12 01:42 am Title: Chapter 33

Kevin can not be dead...he was seen as an old man...i think he's gonna return...

Author's Response:

I like that you remember that little piece of information. LOL.  Thanks for the review, I appreciate it. And thanks for reading. :)

Reviewer: Carter-Orange Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/04/12 12:05 am Title: Chapter 32

So it's Erika and AJ?  The sneaky pair!

I like how Nick said it was just like the movie with the two guys both wanting the same woman.  I love that film.

Can't wait for more!



Author's Response:

When I decided on where AJ and Erika were I HAD to use that premise.  I have actually never seen the movie so I hope that it was the correct storyline. LOL.  And this is the 2nd time Julie's been to Hawaii in her time travels. HEH and the 2nd time WWII has been involved in her jumps. HEH.  Thanks for the review Steph, I can't believe I'm getting so close to the end.

Reviewer: Carter-Orange Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/03/12 11:59 pm Title: Chapter 31

You had to sneak a shirtless Nick in there, hehehe, I love it!

Exciting chapter, good thing she jumped!



Author's Response:

In all fairness, this was written BEFORE the shirtless Nick discussion, but yes I liked adding a shirtless Nick! Blame Erika's pic on twitter for that one! HEH.  Thanks for the review Steph. I haven't written action in a long, long time so I wasn't sure how this chapter was.

Reviewer: kevmylove Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/03/12 09:16 pm Title: Chapter 32

I knew it!!! She trusted them and thy were laying low. This getting good. Nick is such a jerk...at least he can still be humorous @ a time like that.

Author's Response:

LOL that they were! heehee she trusted everyone at the project but these two are espeically hard for her to accept.  I can't remember how I made him a jerk  or humorous... LOL I am bad, I should reread my stuff ... Thanks for the review Erika.

Reviewer: kevmylove Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/03/12 05:13 pm Title: Chapter 31

Ouchie that fall had to hurt. So lucky she has two men attending her. Why was Brian tryi g to take her back...Im anxious to know. Hurry and update woman!!!!!

Author's Response:

mmmm I want to fall down and get hurt if those two are attending me too! LOL.  I don't know about Brian, he's a strange one in this story... we shall see we shall see. Thanks for the review Erika.

Reviewer: kevmylove Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/03/12 05:10 pm Title: Chapter 30

Nick is going to die too. Hmm so curious as to how all this will end. So many possibilities.
Brian?!?

Author's Response:

She and Nick are linked, it is an unusual connection they share.  It will end, I promise that, though I'm not sure everyone will like the end.... *whistles* thanks for the review Erika.

Reviewer: kevmylove Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/03/12 05:06 pm Title: Chapter 29

Well we know Howie is innocent! I'm still trying to guess who the other two are. Suddenly I'm wondering about AJ and Erika.

Author's Response:

Is Howie innocent? Maybe he's playing Charles even? LOL... we shall see we shall see... I only have 3 left to write and 8 left to post... wow.... lol. Thanks for the review Erika.

Reviewer: Carter-Orange Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/02/12 08:17 pm Title: Chapter 30

So Nick really does care, hmm, I wonder if that will change things with Kevin?

Oh please let him be OK.

Looking forward to more Lore :)



Author's Response:

Does he care or is it the connection they seem to share? LOL.  mmmm still thinking of shirtless Kevin... *sigh*  Thanks for the review Steph...

Reviewer: Carter-Orange Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/02/12 08:07 pm Title: Chapter 29

As we were discussing Nick shirtless on Twitter, I should also mention that Kevin should be shirtless always too, lol :)

So glad Howie isn't the bad guy, but wonder who is working with Jessica?



Author's Response:

well that's a given, Kevin shirtless, with an apron holding a spoon dripping with batter of some cake or something he's been baking. I see a CALENDAR idea. LOL.  *giggles*  I'm glad Howie isn't the bad guy either, remember he's not bad.. he's around in 2045, that was a big hint there. ;)  Thanks for the review and for distracting me with thoughts of shirtless Kevin, Steph