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Reviewer: Alexsgirl_ritz Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/25/12 11:21 am Title: Chapter 22

Julie can't resist the Carter charm... :)

Author's Response:

Who can??   LOL thanks for the review Ritz.

Reviewer: Alexsgirl_ritz Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/25/12 11:16 am Title: Chapter 21

ugh! i hate it when everyone is being suspicious...

Author's Response:

I hated writing everyone as suspicious believe it or not... I wasn't sure if I was making it believable or just tossing out suspicion to toss it around. Thanks for the review Ritz.

Reviewer: Alexsgirl_ritz Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/25/12 11:11 am Title: Chapter 20

Julie, you shouldn't have told anyone even the love of your life because everything is complicated... the person you are looking for might be Kevin for all we know....

Author's Response:

She had to have someone to trust and if you can't trust the man you love who can you trust right?  I agree her life has gotten complicated, possibly more so than when she first got involved with the volunteers. Thanks for the review Ritz.

Reviewer: Alexsgirl_ritz Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/25/12 11:04 am Title: Chapter 19

oh man, this is a very tough job for Julie... I hope everything will be better soon...

Author's Response:

Yes I agree, how do you find out who is doing that without making it apparent you are looking into it? It could get dangerous for her too I think :) Thanks for the review Ritz.

Reviewer: Alexsgirl_ritz Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/25/12 10:57 am Title: Chapter 18

it's good to finally back at reading this one.... hmmm sneaky howie... everyone is suspicious, though.

Author's Response:

Everyone is suspicious... every where Julie looks she sees sign of guilt. Glad you are able to read again Ritz, I've missed you and your reviews. :)

Reviewer: Carter-Orange Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/25/12 10:43 am Title: Chapter 25

I'm glad she told Howie about Nick and that he understood what is happening to her regarding the virus.  Hopefully she can be fixed.  So it's not Brian then...hmm, I wonder who then?

Great chapter Lore, I love all the detail and twists you put into it :)



Author's Response:

Funny thing about Howie figuring it out... that was not planned.  I was writing this chapter and it just sort of came out, an explanation... I never had that connection before I wrote this chapter.  I shocked myself by linking them. :)  Thanks for the review Steph, glad you enjoy the twists.

Reviewer: Carter-Orange Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/21/12 09:37 pm Title: Chapter 24

Hmm so it could be Brian?  I wonder who else though?  



Author's Response:

no kidding... maybe one but who are the others?  dun dun dun. Thanks for the review Steph!

Reviewer: kevmylove Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/21/12 07:40 am Title: Chapter 24

Oh throw me a curve ball here. I didn't even see that coming and I'm not sure that was smart of Kevin. He's just starting to rub me wrong...(which in any case I wouldn't mind if he rubbed me right or wrong...hehehe)



Author's Response:

mmm Kevin rubbing me!!! I'd like that too! LOL. Kevin has always been headstrong, we just see it more now that Julie is closer to him. LOL.   yes curveball, that's what this was... yes... *whistles innocently as in that might not be the end of the curveballs* Thanks for the review Erika

Reviewer: kevmylove Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/19/12 08:11 pm Title: Chapter 23

I read this last jght, but my comp was veig a butt. So, I think Nick and Julie Make a cuter couple. Maybe cause She's so lovey dovey with Kevin. Hahaha I dunno I'm just liking nick more.

I wonder what Howie will tell them and if he's even trustworthy..

Author's Response:

LOL... lovey dovey with Kevin? LOL... cause she loves him? LOL... and it's always more fun to have a love/hate relationship than a love/love one for story purposes right? LOL.  I don't think Nick liked how CP went and he's now trying to redeem himself when I write. LOL. thanks for the review Erika!

Reviewer: Carter-Orange Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/19/12 10:56 am Title: Chapter 23

They do work well together and I'm starting to think they are better together than she is with Kevin (even if I do love Kevin, lol)

I wonder what Howie will say?  Can't wait to see!



Author's Response:

I know, Nick and Julie seemed to just flow when they were talking to that guy.  She just picked up on what he was doing and went with it.  Nick is quite a different guy than Kevin, not as serious .... Thanks for the review Steph!

Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/19/12 09:39 am Title: Chapter 23

I feel so bad for not reading on the regular. I've been so busy but I'm still enjoying the story, Lore :)

Author's Response:

It's alright everyone gets busy.  I'm glad you are still enjoying it Tracy! Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: kevmylove Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/18/12 07:10 pm Title: Chapter 22

LOL!! Is it bad that I"m not sure I trust Kevin anymore. Therefore I get all giddy when she's around Nick. Lord, that man has a hold on her for some reason. She just KISSED HIM!! Bad Julie. I wonder if Kevin will find out :(

Sorry took so long, I thought I had already read the most recent update. DUH!



Author's Response:

LOL you are just having a thing for Nick at the moment maybe that's why you get giddy when she is around Nick!!! LOL.  Yes she kissed him, she's going crazy!   It's okay nobody seems to notice my updates anymore ;) LOL

Reviewer: Carter-Orange Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/11/12 10:45 am Title: Chapter 22

Hmm so 5 of them are on the take?  I wonder who they are.

That attraction between Nick and Julie seems to be getting stronger, or am I imagining it?  Can't wait for more :)



Author's Response:

there are five! muahahahhahhaha  I suppose the attraction is getting stronger, hrm... wonder why? Thanks for the review Steph!

Reviewer: kevmylove Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/08/12 07:35 am Title: Chapter 21

Holy shit I'm getting married to AJ!!! Ok...sooooo sorry I was all excited when I read it and was like EEEEK! Then my parents decided to take me to the movies and I ended up somehow erasing the longer review I had. CRAP! Now I know why you were like "That's it"

*sigh*



Author's Response:

LOL yes I thought you would freak out about it but your other review had nothing.. LOL.  Thanks for the review Erika.

Reviewer: Carter-Orange Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/07/12 07:20 pm Title: Chapter 21

So it could be Erika on the take?  Or anyone else really...

So glad it's not Kevin though and it's good he's going to help Julie find out who it is.

Great chapter Lore :)



Author's Response:

it really could be anyone... Who knows what is going on.. Julie has to figure it out and she nas NOTHING.   Thanks for the review Steph.