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Reviewer: kevmylove Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/07/12 07:10 am Title: Chapter 21

I'm not sure I believe what he is saying.



Author's Response:

believe what who is saying? Kevin? LOL!!  You think he's pulling the wool over Julie's eyes? He could be...? How does she get herself between Nick and Kevin all the time and never knowing who to trust?? Didn't she learn her lesson!! Thanks for the review Erika.

Reviewer: kevmylove Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/07/12 06:56 am Title: Chapter 20

What the hell Kevin?!?!?! That's a really weird reaction, although I can understand that he doesn't trust Nick being around her for certain reasons...

Could it really be Kevin?!?!?! eeeek



Author's Response:

It could really be Kevin, wouldn't that be nasty of me??? LOL.  But he has reasons to not want Julie around Nick... Thanks for the review Erika.

Reviewer: Carter-Orange Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/04/12 11:47 am Title: Chapter 20

Noooooo Kevin, I thought you were a good guy :(  Maybe it's him after all!  He did over react to Julie being linked to Nick through no doing of her own, it's not like she asked for it.

Can't wait for more, you really like keeping us on our toes with this guessing Lore!



Author's Response:

His reaction to Julie being linked was strange indeed.  Maybe he's just upset that Julie is falling for Nick's "charm" and believes what he told her.  Julie and Nick do have a sexual history too, that could be bothering him. *shrugs*  or he could just be guilty and pissed off that he's been found out.    I'm glad you are enjoying being kept on your toes.  Thanks for the review Steph.

Reviewer: kevmylove Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/02/12 07:24 pm Title: Chapter 19

Hmm...so could it be that Jessica? He...I kinda like how sneaky Julie can be sometimes, especially when Kevin isn't around.



Author's Response:

Yes she is quite sneaky and gets herself into a lot of trouble when she does that. It could be Jessica... we shall see.... Thanks for the review Erika.

Reviewer: kevmylove Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/30/11 09:25 pm Title: Chapter 18

I'm noticing that poor Julie can't trust anyone. I'm not even sure she can trust Kevin anymore.



Author's Response: It seems that way doesn't it.... just like before when she didn't know who to trust huh? Thanks for the review Erika.

Reviewer: Carter-Orange Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/30/11 11:59 am Title: Chapter 19

It would be too easy to catch her like that, but sometimes it is the simple things!  Julie should be careful with the information.



Author's Response:

Julie should be careful, this could potenitally be more dangerous than chasing Nick through time. Thanks for the review Steph.

Reviewer: kevmylove Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/24/11 12:11 pm Title: Chapter 17

Haha...thank god it was Steph! She gets on my last nerve, but then again so does Julie. Seriously!



Author's Response:

it was a very good thing that it was Steph!! Julie gets on your nerves???  thanks for the review Erika.

Reviewer: Carter-Orange Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/23/11 12:39 pm Title: Chapter 18

Hmm so it could be Howie and Jessica then?  I don't blame Julie for keeping things to herself, she can't trust anyone at the moment!

Great update Lore :)



Author's Response:

It could be both, they have the opportunity, they are in charge after all.  I think she may confide in one person....  ;)  Thanks for the reivew Steph.

Reviewer: Carter-Orange Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/15/11 08:23 pm Title: Chapter 17

Steph is a real bitch, but looks like she wants Nick so much that she's willing to give out information that can help Julie...if she ever gets free that is!

Maybe it's this link which is making them so sexually attracted to one another.

Great chapter Lore :)



Author's Response:

Steph is a bitch who still wants Nick, yes I am glad I made that apparent. :) And I think maybe you are reading my mind too! :)  Old habits are hard to break with those two though huh? sex sex sex.. lol  Thanks for te review Steph.

Reviewer: summer03 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/13/11 08:32 pm Title: Chapter 17

ooh that steph!!! man this is getting better by the chapter!! eek!

Author's Response:

Thanks Patti, I'm glad you are thinking it is getting better.  Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: Alexsgirl_ritz Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/13/11 06:02 pm Title: Chapter 17

this is getting more and more and more complicated... If I didn't have Steph's image (yes, the kind and sweet Steph) in my head, I would have hated this fictional Steph. But like Nick, I know she has her reasons, that could make her the good one in here.

Author's Response: I love how she's a bitch yet you still think she could be good..lol Oh Ritz you just see the good in everyone don't you? :) thanks for the review

Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/13/11 09:03 am Title: Chapter 17

Ooh I knew it would be Steph. What a bitch she is....I hope Julie figures out something soon, all the waiting would kill me. Great update Lore :)

Author's Response:

Yah I would NOT want to be in Julie's situation, even if it meant spending some quality alone time with Nick and Kevin ;)   LOL Thanks for the review Tracy

Reviewer: summer03 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/12/11 10:45 pm Title: Chapter 16

omg you had to leave it there!!!! man... I need more!

Author's Response:

I did leave it there.. muahahahahahaha I really didn't realize how much of a cliff hanger I had left.  Didn't realize people would wonder WHO caught them. LOL

Reviewer: Alexsgirl_ritz Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/08/11 12:28 pm Title: Chapter 16

Oh my... that was hot! I can't blame Julie though, I might have done the same thing if Nick was standing so close to me. LOL Why do I have a soft spot for Nicky now... Why do I feel he's not the bad guy at this point? Aww Lore, More!!!! and I want to know who caught them... probably Steph.

Author's Response:

Nick is definitely a more complex character in this story. Good/bad/good/bad which is he really??  Nick really just demands a sex scene in any story of mine I write with him in it anymore! Stars and their lists of demands! geesh. Thanks for the review Ritz, we shall see who interrupted in the next chapter.

Reviewer: Carter-Orange Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/08/11 12:11 pm Title: Chapter 16

Fantastic chapter Lore!  I'm wondering if the voice at the door is Kevin?  But who could resist the Carter charm, I know it would be hard to do!  Can't wait for more and well done on the nominations :)



Author's Response:

You would think you should be able to resist screwing the man who tried to kill you and tried to have the man you loved killed. LOL. that would take a LOT of charm to make me forget something like that.  Thank you for the review Steph.