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Reviewer: Alexsgirl_ritz Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/24/11 09:02 am Title: Chapter 13

See??? Nick has to be alive... but I really wonder why he was so kind and it seemed like he meant no harm to Julie... What is he up to? Well, you need to post the next chapter soooon. :)

Author's Response: Yah I know I did not hide it very well did I? Lol Nick has his reasons for keeping Julie safe... thanks for tye review Ritz.

Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/23/11 09:21 pm Title: Chapter 13

:O AHA!!!!! I knew the bastard was alive! I somehow doubt he is not out to harm Julie...man. Glad I caught up, sorry I fell behind again, still loving this! Great update Lore!

Author's Response:

LOL. I knew you'd like reading this chapater. Thanks for the review Tracy!

Reviewer: Carter-Orange Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/23/11 02:22 pm Title: Chapter 13

I knew it!!  I knew Nick had to be alive still!!  But I wonder how?  I wonder why he didn't want Julie dead?  What are him and Steph up to?  Or maybe he's not working with Steph any more?  Hmm, I have no idea.  You have me wanting more!

When Julie realised she was in Tudor times I immediately thought of Henry Cavill in The Tudors, mmm mmm mmm.  What a lovely image to have whilst in work :)

Can't wait for more Lore, really loving this :)



Author's Response:

Thanks Steph, no I couldn't hide the fact that Nick was still alive for this one very well.  The story just wouldn't be the same without him ya know? 

I had to use Tudor era, I was going to try something more dramatic, like someone trying to save someone that was killed during this time and Julie having to stop it but I couldn't think of who or why. LOL.  So I did this.

Thanks for the review Steph, I am so glad you are still enjoying this. :)

Reviewer: Alexsgirl_ritz Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/21/11 08:36 pm Title: Chapter 12

I love that they had some time together but wasn't hot as the peace scene... I guess there wasn't much time as Julie might jump in the middle of something.... lol I wonder if Julie will jump into another place or back to library before her punishment. Hope you update soon, Lore. And by the way... Happy 21st birthday again! lol

Author's Response:

no I don't think anything has been as hot as the peach scene! LOL.  It would hinder things if you don't know if you are going to jump randomly in the middle of an activity.  Thanks for the review Ritz.

Reviewer: Carter-Orange Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/21/11 10:58 am Title: Chapter 12

Wow, harsh place!  But I suppose it didn't take much for them to publicly execute people in those days :(  I just hope she jumps or someone rescues her before anything happens.



Author's Response:

it i harsh and I made it harsher than it probably was, but I needed something dramatic!!! :)  Thanks for the review Steph!.

Reviewer: Alexsgirl_ritz Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/18/11 11:39 am Title: Chapter 11

That new rogue volunteer and Tessa got me very, very curious. But glad Kevin and Julie will have some quiet time together... I just hope Julie won't randomly jump while they were up doing something. lol

Author's Response:

Yes let's hope she doesn't jump during anything. LOL. that could be awkward! :)  Thanks for the review Ritz.

Reviewer: Carter-Orange Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/17/11 12:41 pm Title: Chapter 11

About time they had some quiet time together ;)  But all this random time travelling is a worry, what if the virus gets worse?  I hope Howie can find a cure soon.  And Nick, is he really gone?  I'm not too sure anymore!  Great chapter Lore :)



Author's Response:

I hope a cure can be found too!  Espeically since she thought she was done randomly jumping through time.  Thanks for the review Steph. :)

Reviewer: Carter-Orange Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/15/11 11:47 am Title: Chapter 10

Weird that she keeps on thinking she's seeing Nick.  Wonder if her mind is playing tricks on her, or if Nick is?  Good thing she jumped back quickly and didn't get too caught up in all those protests.  Howie will have to get to the bottom of it.  Great update Lore :)



Author's Response:

It is quite strange that she's seeing Nick. It was good that she jumped quickly, yet was also able to get something to eat at the second jump before going away again.  Let's hope Howie can figure it out in the absence of Charles.  Thanks for the review Steph.

Reviewer: Alexsgirl_ritz Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/15/11 10:29 am Title: Chapter 10

poor Julie for still randomly jumping... she must have been so scared while the guards were firing in the protest. and Howie said she'd be alright... hmmmm

Author's Response:

I know I would be scared to have guards fire at me. My dad was actually at that first protest in 1970.  He wasn't protesting but he was on campus.  3 of the 4 people killed during the shootings were not part of the protest but rather students walking by on their way to class.  My dad was taking a test and was rushed from his building to the parking lot during the affter effects.   thanks for your review Ritz.

Reviewer: summer03 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/14/11 10:38 pm Title: Chapter 9

uhoh now I'm suspicious of howie and no!!! poor julie! I still strongly believe Nick is still alive!

Author's Response:

why are you suspicious of Howie!!?!! what could be suspicious about that smiley, winking man???   Nick's dead!!!! geesh.  Thanks for the review Patti

Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/14/11 09:37 pm Title: Chapter 9

Uh oh. I hope Kevin did go with her...and that they find out why she's jumping again :/ loved the update!

Author's Response:

It would be a hell a lot easier if Kevin went with her wouldn't it. LOL.  They better find out why she's jumping... how annoying. LOL.  Thanks for the review Tracy.

Reviewer: Alexsgirl_ritz Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/14/11 01:37 pm Title: Chapter 9

It is not just Howie's lab that is spooky... Howie is too, and for the record I never liked him in this story. I felt like he has a double character or something. Nick is alive... I'm sure about that, he will be if I am the one that wrote this story. lol I can't wait for the next chapter and know if Howie, Tessa and Justin are working for Nick as well... I can't believe I'm two chapters behind and glad I'm all caught up now... :)

Author's Response:

Howie does act a bit strange at times... I wonder if he's not taking after Charles a bit, we all know Charles is a bit crazy! LOL.  Nick, Nick, Nick... is that all you all can think about... geez.    Yah I have a nasty habit of updating on a Friday and a Sunday with this story when you can't read them, but I still love that you have kept up with this story too, means a lot. Thanks for your review Ritz.

Reviewer: Carter-Orange Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/14/11 11:46 am Title: Chapter 9

Maybe whatever Steph injected her with is something with goes undetected?  Those dreams of Nick are quite scary, I wonder if he's lurking somewhere or is he really dead?  His body was never found was it.

Great chapter Lore, I wonder if Kevin jumped with Julie?



Author's Response:

Hrm.. not sure if it is undetected.  Makes you have second thoughts about dreaming of Nick doesn't it?  We shall see what's going on later... lol 

Thanks for the review Steph.

Reviewer: kevmylove Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/14/11 08:06 am Title: Chapter 9

Oh no she didn't just disappear!!! That totally sucks now I have to wait and see if Kevin went with her. :(



Author's Response:

Yes, she did just diappear!! LOL.  so strange that she is randomly jumping again!  Thanks for the review Erika.

Reviewer: kevmylove Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/14/11 08:04 am Title: Chapter 8

Justin and Tessa are kinda weird. Um...those aren't the foolios she saw the first time with Brian are they? OK maybe not.

Ugh...I was just waiting for her to jump. Not cool. I feel Kevin's pain and she's stubborn. Still wanna smack her!



Author's Response:

No Mary and Patrik were with Brian and Charles in the coffee shop.. I had to think about that a moment before I could answer.   Yah... like I said, you'd think after everything that happened with Nick that she would be wiser and look before she leapt but geez... guess now.  Thanks for the review Erika.