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Reviewer: lmalg Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/05/13 04:37 am Title: Chapter 5

Well you both know my first choice is AIM, but it would be great to read the AJ/Brian story too.  

Great way to end this story.  I loved all the little moments between the couples and I especially loved the reaction of everyone when Jake took off his t-shirt and dove into the pool.  That was quite entertaining.  It was fun to see a little more of the relationship between Jake and Richard.  They're really good together.

Really looking forward to what comes next!

 



Author's Response: You've got your first choice Linda, hope you enjoy it. It was very entertaining when we wrote it too. The reaction is actually what J went through when he saw his real life 'Jake' strip off so it was quite entertaining to write it. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Sam_noelle Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/02/13 09:40 am Title: Chapter 5

I've been waiting to read An Ideal Marriage for such a long time, so I'd LOVE to see that one next, but you're the author, so whatever you think is best for the stories.

As far as this last chapter, loved the moments between Nick, Kevin and his family. Very intriguing dynamic for all of them.

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing, glad you're enjoying it so far. Hope you enjoy 'An Ideal Marriage?' and it lives up to your expectations.

Reviewer: dazzle_em55 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/02/13 03:03 am Title: Chapter 5

Please post both!!!!



Author's Response: We'll definitely be posting both :)

Reviewer: balance Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/02/13 02:44 am Title: Chapter 5

Wow....choices, choices, choices!  Whatever you guys post will be fine with me as long as you post something!

As for this chapter, I'm a little confused.  I thought the characters were living in Australia...not LA.  But regardless, I really enjoyed this chappie.  As I was reading it, I kept seeing little "snapshots" of the scenes.  I couldn't help but notice the difference in the relationships between Nick/Kevin and their dads.  It is strange to see the confident Kevin so uncomfortable with his father (I know their's a backstory there!).

Once again, thanks for inviting us readers into this world. (BTW, my e-mail addy is the same: hollmonp@yahoo.com).  

Hey CJ.....I didn't get my birthday present this year :(

 

Love Pammy Whammy



Author's Response: Allow me to clear up the confusion. We switched it from Australia to LA. J had holidayed in Australia when he started the story back then and decided to base it in Australia. You guess correct about the backstory :) Thanks, our gmail contact list wasn't listing you for some reason. CJ said she hasn't written much of your birthday present this year but will definitely try and finish up something this month. Hope all's well with you Pammy, take care!

Reviewer: nycki02 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/01/13 07:51 pm Title: Chapter 5

I would love to read the nick and kevin story, I really liked that story, but if you wanna do aj and brian thats ok to.



Author's Response: Hope you enjoy 'An Ideal Marriage?' We'll post the AJ/Brian one later.

Reviewer: nana1989 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/20/13 06:51 pm Title: Chapter 4

Author's Response: My apologies! Hope whatever you're studying for went off well. Thank you for reading. Sorry you keeping you waiting - Cole)

Nope I totally failed, but  not because I was distracted by your story, I didn't know what I was doing lol, but I took it again this year and got a B, and I was on here pretty much every other day (addicted). I loved this chapter, so sappy and romantic and drama filled. Just how I like em. So now that I've graduated and searching for a job, I have lots of free time to read :) however after reading  your endnote, I think you should take all the time you need. Just know this story is beautifully written, I'm so glad you decided to share it, thanks :)



Author's Response: I'm glad you took it again and passed. Getting a B is pretty good! Congratulations. Thank you for reviewing, it means a lot. Lol if it's sappy & romantic you want I can manage that. Happy reading. Hope this chapter is sappy enough for you.

Reviewer: luckystarre Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/04/13 11:59 pm Title: Chapter 1

Wow, I have been searching for "An Ideal Marriage?" for a while now and didn't know this existed! Thanks for writing the backstory to Nick and Kevin's relationship, and I am SUPER excited to see the new "An Ideal Marriage?" posted (hopefully soon? fingers crossed!)

 

Thanks for sharing your story! It's so good!



Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing, it means a lot. Glad you're enjoying the story. I'll start posting An Ideal Marriage? Nick & Kevin's story from July.

Reviewer: balance Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/12/13 01:44 am Title: Chapter 4

Today was a day in which I was not in the best of mood....it was raining, I'm fighting a sinus infection, and my patience was short.  So when I got home from work, hoping to unwind, I came to this site and saw this update.  It has certainly put me in a better mood!

Thank you, Cole, for sharing a part of yours and Jamie's life with us. From the vows to the toasts, it was all beautiful.  Thank you all, J, Cole, and CJ, for sharing this wonderful story with us.  I tend to be quite cynical; yet, you have created this wonderful cast of characters which have provided me with many "awwww" moments and has made me completely sappy when reading it.  Again, thank you for inviting us into this world.

Now, not to be pushy or anything, but on to the next part!!!!!

Love ya,

Pammmy Whammy



Author's Response: We were just talking about you last week. How are you? Is your email still the same? I cannot take credit for this, it's all CJ & J. Pretty much all the characters in these stories are based off of one of our friends. Some on J and me. It's been quite funny at times for me to come across something they had written and realize the signs point at me! Hope you enjoy this chapter too and it's sappy enough for you. Thank you for reviewing, it means a lot Pammy.

Reviewer: lmalg Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/10/13 02:09 am Title: Chapter 4

That was beautiful.  It was such a perfect wedding all around.  I can't imagine how you could have made it better.   Thank you for writing such a wonderful chapter and thank you Cole for sharing with us.



Author's Response: My pleasure, glad you enjoyed it Linda. Hope you enjoy the next chapter. Thank you for reviewing, it means a lot.

Reviewer: nana1989 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/03/12 10:16 am Title: Chapter 3

lol I keep coming back, hoping chapter.4 is up, cutting into my study time :) Great Job on this chapter, loved it. Don't leave me hanging for to long, I need my fix so I can get some work done. :)



Author's Response: My apologies! Hope whatever you're studying for went off well. Thank you for reading. Sorry you keeping you waiting - Cole

Reviewer: lmalg Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/18/12 12:58 am Title: Chapter 3

YES!!!!  Finally Annaliese and Monique got their comeuppance.  And of course I'm thrilled that Nick finally allowed Kevin to show the world how they feel about each other.   I also love reading any scenes with Corey.  He's rapidly becoming one of my favorite characters,  Maybe even more than Nick which is saying a lot.   He is just such a sweetheart.  

Now what is this big secret that Matt is keeping?

This chapter was definitely worth waiting for. You both did a great job!

*hugs*

Linda



Author's Response: Thanks Linda. Well Corey is a mix of two of my favorite people so I'm glad you like him. Thanks for reading - Cole

Reviewer: balance Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/11/12 06:58 am Title: Chapter 3

I love it, love it, love it!!!!  I loved seeing Corey's enjoyment....he's just adorable.  I loved the fact that Nick staked his claim on Kevin.  And finally, I really loved that Monique and Annalise finally saw that Kevin wants Nick!

Great update! 

Love ya both,

Pammy Whammy



Author's Response: Thank you Pammy for your continued support, encouragement and just for being you. Everytime I hold onto the chapter and stop writing CJ will pull out all your reviews and support from over the years to her and J and flash it in front of my face until I don't get off my ass and work at the next chapter. I'm sorry I make you wait for such a long time between chapters. I promise to stop doing that. -Cole

Reviewer: nana1989 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/25/12 09:39 pm Title: Chapter 2

I LOVE THIS!!! Please give me more... this story is so beautiful you guys are wonderful writers 



Author's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewing :) Glad you're enjoying the story.

Reviewer: lmalg Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/12/12 10:28 pm Title: Chapter 2

Another great chapter!!  You guys never disappoint.  I especially loved the scenes of Nick getting jealous.  He is usually so self contained,  It's fun to see this other side of him.  And of course his "confrontation" with Kevin when he finally got back to the room was quite memorable. ;)  I look forward to seeing what you come up with for chapter 3! 



Author's Response: Thank you :) That confrontation had us both laughing while we wrote it. Reminded us a lot about how J and Cole's arguments would go. Only one person realizes that an argument took place! Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: balance Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/12/12 03:15 am Title: Chapter 2

I'm so happy to have an update!  I've been missing you!  Love the AJ/Brian dynamic...they're cute.  And the alpha Nick....what a surprise!

Looking forward to the next update!

Pammy Whammy



Author's Response: Thank you hun! I've been missing you too *hugs* I have to admit I do adore my AJ/Brian here. Cole enjoys writing them the most for some reason. More to come soon. Thanks for reading and reviewing!