Date: 03/02/13 07:53 pm Title: Prologue
I came to this site, wanting to read a good Brian story, and wow, did I find it! I couldn't stop reading until there was no more to read lol. You have me on the edge of my seat to find out what happens! Very different idea for a story, quite OUT THERE, but really riveting! Kudos to you for a great job taking your idea and turning it into a story well worth reading. Brian being tortured is KILLING me, by the way so please make it stop, ok? Lol Please update soon.
Thank so much for reading and reviewing. I had this idea for a story and wasn't sure how well it would be received once it got to the OUT THERE part of it. I am glad it is riveting enough to keep people interested despite that factor. I almost made this a Kevin story but Brian just seemed to fit better and I'm glad I went with him. :) Thanks again your review made my day and I hope to end Brian's torture soon. :)
Date: 04/24/12 09:17 am Title: Prologue
Hey Lore, do you still have room for one more reader? :)
Ritz, there is always room for more readers!! :) I am so happy to see you reviewing! it means so much to me that you are giving this story a try.
Date: 04/23/12 06:28 am Title: Prologue
Very nice start, I am intrigued about a few things but I do enjoy mysteries like this...sounds like it will be a good one :) I usually enjoy your work Lore- and I am liking this so far. Reading on :)
yay I'm so glad you were able to start! so glad you got your desire to read fanfic back, we would all seriously miss your reviews and stories if you left. :) Thanks so much for the compliment, I hope you enjoy this story as much as my other words. Thanks for the review.
Date: 04/17/12 02:56 am Title: Prologue
please update soon, i want to know what is going on! is kevin good or evil too. what is howie up to?
yay review! LOL Thanks so much for the review Kimberly. There is a lot to question in this, I hope I portray it all the way it is in my head. Thanks again, I hope to have another update tomorrow.
Date: 12/22/11 10:04 am Title: Prologue
Interesting start Lore, you've got me wanting to read more and see what it is exactly they are going to have to do and who the mystery people are.
Thanks for the review Steph! I thought I'd put some feelers out there for this story. I know scenes for this story but I'm not sure of all the details yet, hopefully my muse will finish one of the others I'm writing before he starts wanting to write this one.
Date: 12/22/11 06:23 am Title: Prologue
Why must they be kept apart? What do they know, that could be so bad?
thanks for the review Lenni, I have the basic idea why they are being kept apart but the details still need to be hammered out.