Reviews For Severed Identities
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Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/23/12 06:46 am Title: Chapter 5

I think some sort of memory is coming back to Brian. I hope he figures things out soon.

Author's Response:

yes, dreams/memories/confusion they are all right up there right now. LOL Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: Carter-Orange Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/15/12 09:58 pm Title: Chapter 5

That could've been awkward between Brian and Leighanne!  Liked the flashback/dream too, can't wait for more :)



Author's Response:

I always have a hard time writing Brian with his real wife in stories, it's why I typically make up a wife or girlfriend.  She happened to "play" intot his role and I felt I could use her but yah... I have a hard time writing scenes between them I hope the writing wasn't awkward.  Thanks for the review Steph, I actually have about half of another chapter done... been BAD about UT but good about the other 2

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