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Reviewer: Carter-Orange Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/24/12 03:49 pm Title: Chapter 15

Hmm I don't think the cleaners in this are the maid variety!



Author's Response:

LOL .... I LOVE that you are commenting on that line I threw in there ;)  heeheee Thanks for the review Steph!

Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/23/12 08:37 am Title: Chapter 15

Pooh is that all? :( damn. I also just realized that I meant to say Megan wanted to marry Nick lol. But still I am hooked so far, adding this to my favorites so I don't miss a new chappie. Great story!

Author's Response:

Thanks for getting caught up in one night it makes me feel great that you enjoyed it that much.  I hope to be able to get some chapters written and posted this week despite the move. LOL  Thanks so much Tracy, you made my morning.

Reviewer: rachel21 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/21/12 04:58 am Title: Chapter 15

Ok not going to lie this chapter confused me. Lol. I need answers! Can't wait for more!

Author's Response:

Yes, I figured out why it's confusing.  It started with her running down the alley and then it never goes back.  I apologize, the chapter was going to be super long so I cut it in half and yah... lol never got back to the alley scene.  Maybe I should "fix" it.  Hrm.  Thanks for the review Rachel.