Reviews For Severed Identities
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Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/07/12 03:55 pm Title: Chapter 22

I strongly believe they are being followed and find it odd the guys haven't tried to contact Brian. hopefully he and Izzy will be okay. Great update Lore!

Author's Response:

it is a little strange that the guys haven't tried to contact Brian... hrm... it's very likely they are being followed. Who knows though, they really could just be men in suits. LOL.  Thanks for the review Tracy.

Reviewer: rachel21 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/05/12 09:21 pm Title: Chapter 22

I am so waiting for these two to jump each other! LOL

Author's Response:

What?? never!! LOL thanks for the review Rachel

Reviewer: Carter-Orange Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/05/12 08:05 pm Title: Chapter 22

Sometimes you need a bit of filler, it was a nice chapter, good to see them getting a little bit of time to just relax.  I'm sure once they get off that plane things won't be as easy!



Author's Response:

well the scene in the car turned out to be longer than I had originally intended.  I didn't get to everything in my outline for this chapter, so it will become the next chapter. :)  I have a feeling this one could possibly be longer than CP, yikes.  Thanks for reading and reviewing Steph.

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