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Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/03/12 02:34 am Title: Chapter 26

I knew Howie was gonna catch them! Glad you're still updating this, I was looking forward to another chapter. It is getting really good. I hope they figure out more soon.

Author's Response:

Yeah, had to have Howie catch them. It would be boring if he just left and they escaped, no fun! LOL. Thanks for the review Tracy, I really am enjoying writing this one.  :)

Reviewer: Carter-Orange Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/19/12 09:48 pm Title: Chapter 25

I really thought they were going to get caught when they heard noises whilst rummaging in Howie's stuff.  Well done Brian for opening the safe and finding the hidden safe.  So now they know that the dreams weren't just dreams and that they were really together sometime in the past, before their memories were erased.

But who is opening the door?  Can't wait to see!



Author's Response:

I couldn't let Izzy have all the glory... she is a good fighter and managed to pick the lock she couldn't open the safe too. Had to give somethig to Brian.  LOL.   They do have proof now.... but what will they do with that? 

Thanks for the review Steph

Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/16/12 09:19 am Title: Chapter 25

Oh shit. I wonder how they know how to pick Locks and safes.....interesting. And oh snap someone is at the door. I bet you anything it is Howie....hope nothing happens but I know I will be wrong. Great update again, Lore!

Author's Response:

they didn't really pick the safe, Brian remembered some numbers of Howie's and used them. LOL.  Hrm... whatever do you mean Howie is at the door.... lol.... ;)  Thanks for the review Tracy

Reviewer: Carter-Orange Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/10/12 09:29 pm Title: Chapter 24

OK, so maybe I was wrong abour Pastor Mike?

What a lovely dream, shame that's all it was though ;)

Was lovely to come home from a weekend away and find 2 chapters!



Author's Response:

mmm was a great SECOND part of her dream! LOL I wouldn't mind that one... lol.  thanks for the review Steph. :)

Reviewer: Carter-Orange Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/10/12 09:20 pm Title: Chapter 23

I don't trust the pastor.  I don't trust anyone who offers to help them and who knew them before they ran!



Author's Response:

nobody trusts anyone anymore.  How can you know who to trust? how can they? Thanks for the review Steph.

Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/09/12 02:41 pm Title: Chapter 24

WTF Lore, you damn tease. I was kinda excited about Brian sexing her up lmao not gonna lie. I also thought it would be peaches all over again ;) anyways, I wonder what is gonna happen now that they are all on the run? I, like Rachel am not liking you right now. Great update.

Author's Response:

LOL I was excited about Brian making the moves too, I'm not gonna lie. LOL ... too bad I'm evil.  No, no more peaches. LOL  Thanks for the review Tracy.

Reviewer: rachel21 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/09/12 12:41 am Title: Chapter 24

You're a damn tease Lore! Argh!! LOL

Great chapter wonder if they can get Howie.

Author's Response:

I'm sorry, I know you don't believe it but I really did have that planned before your last comment.  :)   lol you didn't think it would be THAT easy though did you?  Thanks for the review Rachel.

Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/08/12 11:12 am Title: Chapter 23

I kept thinking the two guys were gonna attack them out in the open but alas, I was wrong. ;) as for the chapter....I somehow think the pastor is involved. I honestly do not believe for one second it is this easy for them to go into hiding. That is my theory. Great update again :)

Author's Response:

well maybe they weren't even part of the group attacking them? Maybe they were just men in a suit in their way to a meeting? ;)   LOL I don't know WHY you'd think I'd make anything hard for the main characters of the story.  :)   Thanks for the review Tracy.

Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/07/12 04:55 pm Title: Chapter 22

I strongly believe they are being followed and find it odd the guys haven't tried to contact Brian. hopefully he and Izzy will be okay. Great update Lore!

Author's Response:

it is a little strange that the guys haven't tried to contact Brian... hrm... it's very likely they are being followed. Who knows though, they really could just be men in suits. LOL.  Thanks for the review Tracy.

Reviewer: rachel21 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/05/12 10:21 pm Title: Chapter 22

I am so waiting for these two to jump each other! LOL

Author's Response:

What?? never!! LOL thanks for the review Rachel

Reviewer: Carter-Orange Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/05/12 09:05 pm Title: Chapter 22

Sometimes you need a bit of filler, it was a nice chapter, good to see them getting a little bit of time to just relax.  I'm sure once they get off that plane things won't be as easy!



Author's Response:

well the scene in the car turned out to be longer than I had originally intended.  I didn't get to everything in my outline for this chapter, so it will become the next chapter. :)  I have a feeling this one could possibly be longer than CP, yikes.  Thanks for reading and reviewing Steph.

Reviewer: Carter-Orange Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/02/12 10:52 pm Title: Chapter 21

Mmm shirtless Brian image in my head now, that's nice just before I go to bed :)

Yay, he came to the rescue with an iron, good thinking.  But I wonder if everything in Kentucky will be OK or will it just be another false memory?  Can't wait for more!



Author's Response:

Yes, Brian shirtless isn't as nice as shirtless Kevin but still a good image. :)  Thanks for reading and reviewing Steph, we shall see about KY. 

Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/02/12 09:50 am Title: Chapter 21

Why do I think this pastor will be in on it too....oh boy Brian. I somehow believe it won't be easy for them. Great chapter yet again Lore!

Author's Response:

time will tell, time will tell.  thanks for reading and reviewing Tracy

Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/01/12 07:32 am Title: Chapter 20

Something sounds fishy with Mike. I am wondering how they worked things out like this for Brian if he's so famous....seems odd. Hope we get more answers soon! Great update Lore!

Author's Response:

well that's science fiction for you... odd ;)  We shall see if they get the answers they need soon... or if they get caught...dun dun dun. thanks for the review Tracy

Reviewer: Carter-Orange Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/31/12 07:58 pm Title: Chapter 20

Interesting stuff with the TV/radio sending out signals to brainwash people, it would answer a lot of the questions about things.

I'm not sure I trust Megan anymore.  What if she hasn't gone for food, but gone to get some others so that Brian and Izzy can be captured.  Hmm...

Can't wait for more :)



Author's Response:

a lot of things can be answered by the brainwashing, but how did she know???  hrmm.... not trusting Megan, interesting, okay... ;)  LOL   Thanks for reading and reviewing Steph.