Date: 04/23/12 07:39 am Title: Chapter 2
Hmmmm seems she and Brian are connected somehow. I can't wait to see what happens next!
Author's Response:
somehow... ;) Thanks for the review Tracy.
Date: 04/23/12 07:33 am Title: Chapter 1
LOL at Izzy saying Nick is the one she wants to marry and her ignoring Brian. Funny chapter.
Author's Response:
I saw later that you corrected yourself to Megan for this comment. LOL Izzy doesn't like them for some reason. There's a reason she can't remember Brian. LOL Thanks for the review.
Date: 04/23/12 07:28 am Title: Prologue
Very nice start, I am intrigued about a few things but I do enjoy mysteries like this...sounds like it will be a good one :) I usually enjoy your work Lore- and I am liking this so far. Reading on :)
Author's Response:
yay I'm so glad you were able to start! so glad you got your desire to read fanfic back, we would all seriously miss your reviews and stories if you left. :) Thanks so much for the compliment, I hope you enjoy this story as much as my other words. Thanks for the review.
Date: 04/21/12 04:58 am Title: Chapter 15
Ok not going to lie this chapter confused me. Lol. I need answers! Can't wait for more!
Author's Response:
Yes, I figured out why it's confusing. It started with her running down the alley and then it never goes back. I apologize, the chapter was going to be super long so I cut it in half and yah... lol never got back to the alley scene. Maybe I should "fix" it. Hrm. Thanks for the review Rachel.
Date: 04/21/12 04:47 am Title: Chapter 14
Oh snap. :-O What the hell is going on?!
Author's Response:
yes... what the hell is going on? thanks for the review Rachel
Date: 04/20/12 04:52 pm Title: Chapter 13
Like I said frustrating! I can't wait to read some more girlie! Awesome job!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading Rachel, I know you don't like to read unfinished stories. I hope I can do this story justice since it is quite a complicated plot. Thanks for the review.
Date: 04/19/12 09:33 pm Title: Chapter 13
Aha, there's that word 'cleaners' again! I think Patricia let that one slip out. So Izzy and Greg are getting along OK, but I think that's all part of the plan to make her forget Brian.
I couldn't help agreeing with her about wanting to dream of Kevin :)
Author's Response:
Who wouldn't want to dream about Kevin? right? lol. Yes there is that word again, more info regarding them should be coming out... Gotta start letting things come out to move it along and maybe one day Izzy and Brian will actually be in the same chapters again. LOL Thanks for reading and reviewing Steph.
Date: 04/18/12 07:28 pm Title: Chapter 12
Hmm lot's going on in this chapter...Howie returning from the dead...all the boys being in on it. Plus what's a cleaner and who are the nine? Can't wait to see what happens next!
Author's Response:
The prologue touched on the nine... so that migt give you a few more answers. ah yes a cleaner... that was also touched on in the prologue but not much info given there... all will be revealed... muahahahaha. LOL Thanks so much for the review Steph.
Date: 04/17/12 03:56 am Title: Prologue
please update soon, i want to know what is going on! is kevin good or evil too. what is howie up to?
Author's Response:
yay review! LOL Thanks so much for the review Kimberly. There is a lot to question in this, I hope I portray it all the way it is in my head. Thanks again, I hope to have another update tomorrow.
Date: 04/14/12 08:54 pm Title: Chapter 11
So glad he managed to stop Howie and the syringe! But I wonder what he'll do next. Can't wait to see!
Author's Response:
yah stopped Howie but killed him in the process, maybe not so good? LOL. . I know I need to get these two back in the same room eh? LOL
Date: 04/12/12 10:00 am Title: Chapter 10
Love the new banner! Great chapter too, now I'm wondering about Megan being a bit secretive.
Author's Response:
thanks, I like the new banner lots more too!! My friend had to help me with some of it because my program wouldn't let me change intensity's with making the text stand out... Hrm... you should know, everyone in this story is going to be suspicious.. lol ... but at least you know of one and she's down but what exactly happened to her and why doesn't Izzy remember her?? hrm.... (why am I asking questions about my story in my response? lol)
Date: 04/09/12 08:03 pm Title: Chapter 9
Hmm I'm sure it's more than just a dream! I wonder what's in the water, I'm certain it's not just water.
Looking forward to more Lore :)
Author's Response:
it's likely not just water... muhahahaha :) Thanks for the review Steph.
Date: 04/09/12 07:58 pm Title: Chapter 8
I'm not sure I trust the teacher either! Hard to know who to trust at the moment, but glad she got away from that crazy so-called friend.
Sorry I've taken so long to read, not been around this weekend.
Author's Response:
I know, there is no way to know who to trust... she doesn't know anything about the nine yet, it's all just one crazy friend and a weird encounter with those guys....
No worries Steph, I knew you'd read when you got a chance. :) Thanks for the review.
Date: 03/21/12 09:05 pm Title: Chapter 7
The plot thickens!! So what are those pills he's taking? I'm guessing they aren't tylenol!
Author's Response:
hrm, what makes you think they aren't Tylenol? LOL. muahahaha yes I am having fun trying to tie in all the little details that will make (or break) this story. I hope I can pull it off well and I hope you enjoy the entire story. :) Thanks for the reviw.
Date: 03/16/12 08:55 pm Title: Chapter 6
I knew there was something dodgy about Natalie, the way she was towards Megan was just wrong and now this! So glad Izzy got away from her, but for how long?
Great chapter Lore :)
Author's Response:
oh Natalie has gone through a few incarnations but she's always been the crazy one that she is ... heehee... Yes for how long has she managed to get away from her. I mean she's a determined little bugger. Thanks for the review Steph I am sure glad you are enjoying this story. :)
