Date: 03/15/12 10:58 pm Title: Chapter 5
That could've been awkward between Brian and Leighanne! Liked the flashback/dream too, can't wait for more :)
Author's Response:
I always have a hard time writing Brian with his real wife in stories, it's why I typically make up a wife or girlfriend. She happened to "play" intot his role and I felt I could use her but yah... I have a hard time writing scenes between them I hope the writing wasn't awkward. Thanks for the review Steph, I actually have about half of another chapter done... been BAD about UT but good about the other 2
Date: 03/15/12 11:59 am Title: Chapter 4
Oooh has she had her memory erased and false memories implanted like the film Total Recall? So glad she managed to fight the men off and her fighting skills are very impressive! I'm loving this Lore and can't wait for more!
Author's Response:
Yah, I sort of was thinking about Total Recall when I finally started working out this story after the little dream I had where they touch and somehow memories start coming back, memories they don't remember. LOL, like total recall. *giggles* I love that movie. wouldn't you love to have a skill you didn't know about and just start using it like that when it's needed? I would. Thanks for the review Steph.
Date: 03/15/12 11:25 am Title: Chapter 3
Finally, the site isn't going down when I try to leave reviews! Sorry it's taken me so long Lore, but I'm really enjoying this and wondering what happened to Brian and Izzy.
Author's Response:
yay finally a review! lol. Thanks so much for trying so hard to get a review for me on this story. If you can believe it, Brian and Izzy are more complicated than Nick/Kevin/Julie from CP. eeegads! Thanks for the review.
Date: 01/05/12 02:39 am Title: Chapter 2
I could follow along easy enough. It was kind of cool the way you switched back and forth. It sort of built the anticipation of what was going to happen more. I felt more anxiety for their meeting. I look forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response:
okay thanks! I just didn't want to only see it from Brian or from Izzy's POV. If it wasn't too bad I will probably continue like that for the rest of the story... at least when they share a chapter. Thanks so much for reviewing and letting me know I appreciate it very much!
Date: 12/22/11 05:40 pm Title: Prologue
I'm interested. Sounds intriguing. Good intro.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review!!
Date: 12/22/11 11:04 am Title: Prologue
Interesting start Lore, you've got me wanting to read more and see what it is exactly they are going to have to do and who the mystery people are.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review Steph! I thought I'd put some feelers out there for this story. I know scenes for this story but I'm not sure of all the details yet, hopefully my muse will finish one of the others I'm writing before he starts wanting to write this one.
Date: 12/22/11 07:23 am Title: Prologue
Why must they be kept apart? What do they know, that could be so bad?
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
Author's Response:
thanks for the review Lenni, I have the basic idea why they are being kept apart but the details still need to be hammered out.
