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Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/07/14 07:24 am Title: Chapter 33

Get it Howard! I hope she wasn't just using him to get Joey jealous. I genuinely feel like there is a connection with these two, plus it's so cute how he remembered
Danny like that. She needs a good guy after the Joey debacle.

Author's Response: I think you may like where this story goes in the next several chapters, then ;)

Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/07/14 07:21 am Title: Chapter 32

It is nice to see Howie getting attention... Most people don't even acknowledge him, myself being guilty of this as well. Haha. I also like that Kevin gave Joey a well deserved black eye and Emily was very classy during the interview, covering for Joey. she was nicer than I would have been lol

Author's Response: I think I've said before that one of my favorite things about this story is that the two BSBs that seem to be featured the least are the ones featured the most in this one.

Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/04/14 10:16 am Title: Chapter 31

Omg I can't believe Joey did that to her. I am kind of heartbroken lol. What a douche. Had to add that drunk Kevin is the best thing ever. I've seen it in person on the BSB cruise and it's hilarious. I could see him singing and everything.

Author's Response: Good to know I channeled drunk Kevin well. Lol. As for Joey, it's been my experience that even great men do some really stupid things sometimes.

Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/04/14 10:14 am Title: Chapter 30

I loved that it was Nick who suggested Amelia was pregnant haha. He's so cute and clueless.

Sorry for slacking in reading the last week or so. Works been crazy and haven't had time to work on reading but I should finish this possibly this weekend. I'm off for two whole days and plan to finish :) kinda sad the challenge is almost over. It's been fun chatting with you about this story.

Author's Response: I thought Nick was definitely the right person to innocently say something like that. I have enjoyed your feedback and look forward to the rest!

Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/24/14 12:42 pm Title: Chapter 29

This was a very tastefully done sex scene. I like that you're not too graphic and give just enough detail without going into too much (if that makes any sense). Very nice job.

Author's Response: Thanks! It made me so nervous to write this chapter, but it's a coming of age story about the main character, so I wanted to include it. I still cringe a little looking back. Lol

Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/24/14 12:16 pm Title: Chapter 28

To be honest I didn't find this that controversial compared to the stuff that happens at VMA awards these days that is. Poor Howie. I wanted to hug him in this chapter. I blew through quite a few chapters tonight. Excited to see what happens next.

Author's Response: I just get a little worried when writing about their real-life struggles. I feel like maybe some things should be off-limits. Like Leslie's death. In my Nick series, I have no intention of ever touching that.

Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/24/14 12:05 pm Title: Chapter 27

Awards shows are always exciting. It's interesting to see it from the musicians point of view. Did you do any research for this story or did you just wing it?

Author's Response: I actually did a lot of research for this story. I tried to make the timeline match up with the real-life tours and such.

Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/24/14 12:00 pm Title: Chapter 26

I am really glad Joey isn't pressuring her
Into anything. I am really blown away with how you've written him, you make me want to date him lol.

Author's Response: Haha. I totally wanted to date him back in the day. Emily needed this distraction from Kevin at this time, and Joey definitely did the job and then some.

Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/24/14 11:37 am Title: Chapter 26

I am really glad Joey isn't pressuring her
Into anything. I am really blown away with how you've written him, you make me want to date him lol.

Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/24/14 11:32 am Title: Chapter 25

Aw Joey is so sweet for coming to see her like that. She should just forget about Kevin, stop moping about him being a dick and be with Joey. He's treating her very well. Ah I guess you can't help who you love though.

Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/24/14 11:27 am Title: Chapter 24

I'm glad he made Amelia take the pregnancy test but I am also surprised that she and Kevin hooked up in the first place after he told Emily she was too young. What a tool bag. Lol he's sexy though. Forgot to mention I loved the visual of him shirtless in the doorway.

Author's Response: LOL . I liked the visual of him shirtless in the doorway, too.

Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/24/14 09:50 am Title: Chapter 23

Oh snap a hookup with Kevin. No wonder Emily us upset. I had a feeling that Emily still had a thing for Kevin too.

Author's Response: Yeah. She can't really give him up that easily.

Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/24/14 09:44 am Title: Chapter 22

Poor Nick and Chrissy. I can't imagine how it was like in real life not being able to tell anyone you were dating or in love. I sometimes wonder if they had conversations with the guys about relationships like Johnny just did. I would be pulling my hair out dealing with all of this drama lol.

Author's Response: I honestly believe they probably had similar conversations with their management at that time.

Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/24/14 09:39 am Title: Chapter 21

I love how she bosses Howie around lol she's feisty. I like it. No damsels in distress in this story.

Author's Response: I tried to make sure she wasn't a damsel in distress or too "Mary Sue."

Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/21/14 09:12 am Title: Chapter 20

I was really thrown by Nick and Chrissy having a shotgun wedding in Vegas. I was impressed with how he seemed wise for his years in this chapter, it was nice
To see him a little. Now back to the good stuff LOL

Author's Response: They are minor characters in the story, but their marriage brings about some interesting points about all of the relationships in the story, as you've read in the next couple of chapters.