Date: 07/03/14 09:36 am Title: Chapter 2
It was nice finding out a little more about the two of them and their lives. I hope we get a story about how they ended up as friends.
Author's Response: I had to go back and look at who'd written which chapter as Lore and I took it in turns, so I will respond to the chapters I wrote and let Lore respond to the ones she did. I really hope you enjoy the story and I also hope that Lore and I can finish this story one day as I really loved it. Yes, as you said in your review to chapter 1, it is kind of a cross between Logan's Run and The Hunger Games. I loved Logan's Run as a kid, and I think when we started writing this story, The Hunger Games movie had come out, so it gave us the idea :)
Date: 02/16/12 01:18 pm Title: Chapter 2
Oh wow... This is great! I think that AJ and Nick both have valid points, but the question is who should they trust? I'd go with the girl rather than authority, but that's just me. lol. I hope Nick doesn't stop dreaming and tries to get out of there, hopefully before AJ's time is up. I have to leave for work in a few, so I'll read the next chapter later! :) Great job!!!
Yeah, it's hard to know who to trust. Hopefully they made the right decision :) Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Date: 02/11/12 11:22 pm Title: Chapter 2
Wow. I like how you're revealing information a bit at a time....but I'm curious about the colored shirts and what they distinguish. Great update, hope to see more soon!
The reason behind the coloured shirts will be revealed eventually. Glad you are enjoying it so far Tracy, me and Lore are really enjoying writing it :)