Reviews For Unwinding Truth
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Reviewer: Mare Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/03/14 09:36 am Title: Chapter 2

It was nice finding out a little more about the two of them and their lives. I hope we get a story about how they ended up as friends.

Author's Response: I had to go back and look at who'd written which chapter as Lore and I took it in turns, so I will respond to the chapters I wrote and let Lore respond to the ones she did. I really hope you enjoy the story and I also hope that Lore and I can finish this story one day as I really loved it. Yes, as you said in your review to chapter 1, it is kind of a cross between Logan's Run and The Hunger Games. I loved Logan's Run as a kid, and I think when we started writing this story, The Hunger Games movie had come out, so it gave us the idea :)

Reviewer: Tri Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/16/12 01:18 pm Title: Chapter 2

Oh wow... This is great! I think that AJ and Nick both have valid points, but the question is who should they trust? I'd go with the girl rather than authority, but that's just me. lol. I hope Nick doesn't stop dreaming and tries to get out of there, hopefully before AJ's time is up. I have to leave for work in a few, so I'll read the next chapter later! :) Great job!!!

Author's Response:

Yeah, it's hard to know who to trust.  Hopefully they made the right decision :)  Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/11/12 11:22 pm Title: Chapter 2

Wow. I like how you're revealing information a bit at a time....but I'm curious about the colored shirts and what they distinguish. Great update, hope to see more soon!

Author's Response:

The reason behind the coloured shirts will be revealed eventually.  Glad you are enjoying it so far Tracy, me and Lore are really enjoying writing it :)