Date: 07/03/14 10:36 am Title: Chapter 2
It was nice finding out a little more about the two of them and their lives. I hope we get a story about how they ended up as friends.
Author's Response: I had to go back and look at who'd written which chapter as Lore and I took it in turns, so I will respond to the chapters I wrote and let Lore respond to the ones she did. I really hope you enjoy the story and I also hope that Lore and I can finish this story one day as I really loved it.
Yes, as you said in your review to chapter 1, it is kind of a cross between Logan's Run and The Hunger Games. I loved Logan's Run as a kid, and I think when we started writing this story, The Hunger Games movie had come out, so it gave us the idea :)
Date: 02/16/12 02:18 pm Title: Chapter 2
Oh wow... This is great! I think that AJ and Nick both have valid points, but the question is who should they trust? I'd go with the girl rather than authority, but that's just me. lol. I hope Nick doesn't stop dreaming and tries to get out of there, hopefully before AJ's time is up. I have to leave for work in a few, so I'll read the next chapter later! :) Great job!!!
Author's Response:
Yeah, it's hard to know who to trust. Hopefully they made the right decision :) Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Date: 02/12/12 12:22 am Title: Chapter 2
Wow. I like how you're revealing information a bit at a time....but I'm curious about the colored shirts and what they distinguish. Great update, hope to see more soon!
Author's Response:
The reason behind the coloured shirts will be revealed eventually. Glad you are enjoying it so far Tracy, me and Lore are really enjoying writing it :)