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Reviewer: Mare Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/04/14 10:18 am Title: Chapter 3

Wow, so like I mentioned this is very Logan's Run. Did that inspire you guys? I think 33 was the year when they all had die and Logan decided to flee. I figured it was only a matter of time before AJ turned black. So, Howie works for the bad guy then? I'm guessing that means that either Kevin or Brian is the Luminary and the other must live outside in the toxic world although part of me still hopes they are all brothers. Maybe long lost. lol

Author's Response: Logan's Run did inspire Steph and she's half the brain on this one so yes. I've actually never seen that movie but Steph did talk to me about it. hrmmm yes Howie works for the bad guys so sad :( you love them as brothers don't you. LOL

Reviewer: Tri Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/16/12 03:10 pm Title: Chapter 3

Okay so I couldn't resist reading this before the students got here this morning... I am loving this story and I cannot wait to read what happens next!! I'm so anxious to see if they escape and find out if there's life outside of their current situation. Update soon please, ladies! :)

Author's Response:

I love that you couldn't wait to read the next chapter, it makes us both feel so good to get feedback like that.  We are being stingy with our chapters, we have more but we want to make sure that our chapters all flow and make sense with the ones that follow so that we don't confuse the readers. Thanks so much for your review Tri. :)

Reviewer: Tri Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/16/12 03:10 pm Title: Chapter 3

Okay so I couldn't resist reading this before the students got here this morning... I am loving this story and I cannot wait to read what happens next!! I'm so anxious to see if they escape and find out if there's life outside of their current situation. Update soon please, ladies! :)

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading, so glad you're enjoying.  I like to sneakily read in work too, hehehe :)

Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/15/12 09:24 pm Title: Chapter 3

I'm starting to think the shirts have something to do with age. I'm really digging this story though, its very interesting. I love it, great update.

Author's Response:

Very perceptive Tracy ;)  I am glad you are liking the story, like we keep saying, Steph and I are having a blast writing this together. Coming up with the plot and ideas is so much fun that we are glad there is someone that is also enjoying what we are doing.  Thank you for reading and reviewing.