Date: 07/05/14 11:43 am Title: Chapter 4
Nice action sequences and descriptions in this chapter. As far as the blinking red palm, is it his actual palm blinking? Or are they wearing some kind of badge thing they can't take off? And if it is their palm blinking what causes it to go off? and how did that happen in the first place?
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked the action in this chapter :) I can't remember if we explained the palm things, but they are kind of like an timer implant which changes colour as the years pass (like on Logan's Run lol). I think we explain why they are there in a later chapter, but I'll have to read and see as I can't remember (this is Steph by the way, in case you're wondering)
Date: 02/21/12 09:04 pm Title: Chapter 4
Hoping they don't run into any trouble. The using "credits" instead of money reminded me of Star Wars. I love it. Great update, hope to see more soon...I'm enjoying this!
I'm sure it won't be that easy for them, hehehehe, this is me and Lore writing and we like to give those boys a hard time :) Yeah, credits is a good currency as money is useless in Endwise. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing Tracy, we both appreciate it.
Date: 02/20/12 05:42 pm Title: Chapter 4
Ooo! I'm glad she showed up. I was PSYCHED to see a new chapter up today! :) I can't wait to see if they manage to get out of there and what they find outside of their community... Can't wait for more!
Thanks so much for reading Tri! We're both so glad you're enjoying it. Hmm I wonder what they'll find?