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Reviewer: Mare Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/06/14 09:49 am Title: Chapter 5

Glad to see they escaped. Wouldn't the guards be looking for her to? Or is she just a random runner and not really part of Endwise?

Author's Response: The guards would be looking for her. I think it's mentioned that when a blue and purple do not show up for work it would raise alarms. Employers and others don't really notice when reds go missing since it happens all the time, now the government would be looking for him since they know he's not captive but they already know he's missing so when the blue (her) and purple (Nick) don't show up for work the guards will know they are missing. :)

Reviewer: KimberlyCan Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/28/12 05:39 am Title: Chapter 5

Really great story so far!  I love AU! Can't wait to see how you bring Howie, Brian and Kevin into the story.  Are they on the outside?  Can't wait to see where this goes!



Author's Response:

thanks for reading and reviewing Kimberly, it's always nice to get a new reviewer into the mix!  You shall see how the others become a part of the story, we have them planned into it so rest assured they all will make their appearances. :) 

Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/28/12 04:27 am Title: Chapter 5

Well looks like they made it out but how long before they either get caught or wonder what the real story is about living underground. Love what you're doing with this story, its awesome so far!

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading Tracy!  They did make it out, but for how long? O_o  Thanks for the revew. :)

Reviewer: Tri Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/27/12 10:16 pm Title: Chapter 5

YAY! They made it outside... And a tree! Awesome! I can't wait to see where their escape takes them... This is only the beginning, I can tell! :) Great chapter. Update soon!!

Author's Response:

Yay! they did make it out!  We shall see how far they get if they get far away from this city!  For all their sakes I hope they do! heehee but like  Steph mentioned, we can't let them go witht out some torture. Thanks for reading Tri.