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Reviewer: Mare Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/07/14 08:28 am Title: Chapter 6

You did a great job with your descriptions in this chapter and how neat it must have been to see all this shrubbery for the first time as well as a sunrise. Nice to know that there's a rebellion on the outside. I'm hoping that this is where we'll meet Kevin or Brian and for me personally, I'm hoping that Emma is not related to whichever BSB is out there lol

Author's Response: I know, can you imagine living in a world like that and then seeing sunlight and the beauty of the world for the first time. I hope it seemed realistic enough. You'll have to wait and see about the others, they will turn up eventually :) Thanks for reading (Steph)

Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/09/12 02:51 pm Title: Chapter 6

Hmmmm. They finally made it outside. Can't imagine what it is like not to see a tree before. Glad they can finally see what they've been missing all this time. Hope they don't have to run too far either. Great job yet again, sorry my review is late. Been a busy girl ;)

Author's Response:

Don't worry Tracy, we know what it's like to be busy with work, family life, etc.  Glad you're still enjoying it.  I can't imagine never seeing those things either, would be like us stepping on another planet I suppose.  Thanks for reading :)

Reviewer: Tri Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/08/12 04:14 am Title: Chapter 6

Great chapter! It's really cool to read about how they're viewing things for the first time... Things we may take for granted. :) I'm anxious to see what lies ahead for them still... And I wonder how long they'll have to run until they're "safe." Great job as always, ladies!! Can't wait for more.

Author's Response:

I know, imagine not knowing what a flower or a tree looked like!  Hmm I wonder when they'll be safe too.  Thanks for reading and reviewing Tri, we're glad you are enjoying it :)