Date: 03/17/12 07:12 am Title: Chapter 7
Ooo awesome job! I was so happy when they realized their palms were no longer colored. I'm so anxious to read more... I hope they're able to get far enough away to make some sort of life outside of Endwise. I wonder if they'll meet anyone else while they're running. Again, great job!! Please update soon. :)
Date: 03/17/12 02:45 am Title: Chapter 7
Wow! I am really loving this story. Nice to see Howie pulled into the story as second in command of the Luminary. Now who is first? Kevin or Brian? One of them I imagine leads the Luminary and one the rebels? hmmmm, can`t wait to read more!
Date: 03/17/12 12:08 am Title: Chapter 7
Curiouser and curiouser. Lots of information again, I really liked this chapter, I also wonder why they were lied to about the outside world. I hope they manage not to get caught by the guards but as Howie said it won't be easy for them. Great chapter, looking forward to more :)
Date: 03/16/12 08:21 pm Title: Chapter 7
You got me hooked to this story. Can't wait for an update!!
Thank you so much Jennifer, we are so glad you are hooked and we hope that we can keep you intrigued. Thanks so much for leaving a review it means a lot to the both of us. :)