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Reviewer: Mare Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/08/14 08:59 am Title: Chapter 7

I'm glad they stopped beeping and glowing.

Author's Response: had to happen sometime right? they had to get power from somewhere. heh! :)

Reviewer: Tri Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/17/12 07:12 am Title: Chapter 7

Ooo awesome job! I was so happy when they realized their palms were no longer colored. I'm so anxious to read more... I hope they're able to get far enough away to make some sort of life outside of Endwise. I wonder if they'll meet anyone else while they're running. Again, great job!! Please update soon. :)

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Reviewer: KimberlyCan Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/17/12 02:45 am Title: Chapter 7

Wow! I am really loving this story.  Nice to see Howie pulled into the story as second in command of the Luminary.  Now who is first? Kevin or Brian? One of them I imagine leads the Luminary and one the rebels? hmmmm, can`t wait to read more!

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Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/17/12 12:08 am Title: Chapter 7

Curiouser and curiouser. Lots of information again, I really liked this chapter, I also wonder why they were lied to about the outside world. I hope they manage not to get caught by the guards but as Howie said it won't be easy for them. Great chapter, looking forward to more :)

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Reviewer: Southern_Sweetie Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/16/12 08:21 pm Title: Chapter 7

You got me hooked to this story. Can't wait for an update!!


Author's Response:

Thank you so much Jennifer, we are so glad you are hooked and we hope that we can keep you intrigued.  Thanks so much for leaving a review it means a lot to the both of us. :)