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Reviewer: Mare Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/14/14 09:13 am Title: Chapter 13

I love how all the girls (all two of them) take notice of Nick. Poor AJ and his junior high crush. So, I have to ask what made you guys decide to make Howie a guard instead of putting him at the camp? And are we ever going to see Howie be Howie just a little bit personality wise? Because right now the only thing that is making Howie, Howie is his name. Just wondering if his character is going to be developed to the point where I can say "Okay he's a bad character because he's under the Luminary's power but there's Howie!" Maybe now that he's being left in charge he'll start figuring out what's what.

I am deeply enjoying your descriptions of life on the outside and how innocent and child like they all seem to be. I'm also glad you brought up the one child thing because I was going to ask about that and how if they constantly were executed how they were going to keep that up. and final LOL at 40 being SO old!

Author's Response: Glad you are liking the descriptions of life outside. They were difficult at times since we are familiar with life as we know it and have to think about things if we were to experience them for the first time as adults. Howie...Howie...Howie.... you will just have to read and see what goes on with him...

Reviewer: Tri Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/25/12 03:21 pm Title: Chapter 13

I've been waiting to get a free moment to read this for a while and it was worth the wait! I'm so excited that Emma, Nick, and AJ are going to learn about others who have escaped. I'm hoping they will be able to stay safe from the Luminary and his forces, though... Eesh. Great work, ladies! :)

Author's Response: thanks for the review Tri, glad you are still enjoying the story. :)

Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/12/12 12:39 pm Title: Chapter 13

Seems all is not well in Endwise, there seems to be a shift going on. Glad they met up wish some more people, hopefully more answers will come about soon. To me there is a huge conspiracy and they are slowly unraveling it. Can't wait for another chapter :)

Author's Response:

more people is always better!  No, Endwise definitely has some problems.  Thanks for reading and reviewing Tracy.