Date: 07/15/14 09:45 am Title: Chapter 14
Aww I really liked this chapter a lot. In fact I think this has been my favorite one so far. You guys are great when it comes to descriptions of the outside world. Loved the village you created here. Nice to see Kristin is Kristin. And I would love to find out how Brian ended up as the Luminary and if he was originally a villager.
Author's Response: Aw thanks Mare, we're glad you're enjoying it and like the world we created for them. I'm going to be chatting with Lore when I'm back from my holiday and we'll be finally getting back to writing this, I'm so excited as this is a story I've really enjoyed writing so far :)
Date: 05/25/12 03:25 pm Title: Chapter 14
I like that there's a hint of romance in the air with Emma and the guys (just wondering which guy, if either, wins her haha). It's so interesting to find out that there's a whole community of people who have lives outside of Endwise. It's gotta be complete shell shock for them to find out that everything they grew up believing is fake. I can't wait for more! :)
Author's Response:
It would be shocking to find out everything you believed was a lie, but hopefully things will get better for them! Thanks for reading Tri :)
