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Reviewer: Mare Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/18/14 10:01 am Title: Chapter 17

I love level headed thinker, Nick. Very smart realization that Emma would be dead if she went back. Glad he wasn't all "Yeah well if you go I'll go too!" I always enjoy when stories stay away from cliches! As long as AJ doesn't go now because he feels he has nothing to live for in Endwise so he'll sacrifice himself

I have another question, I know you guys are probably sick of my questions but the thing I'm confused about that maybe I'm just asking too soon, if Kevin is the one that founded that village, where did all the other people come from? I know most had never even been in Endwise and a lot are clearly older than Kevin. It made me think there was a civilization out there long before Kevin got to that village. And if Brian knows where Kevin is, how come they bothered to search for the escapees? Because most likely they would end up at the village, right?

And yes, Lore you should check out The 100. I think it's a show you'd actually really enjoy. I was on the fence about it at first but it managed to suck me in. It's very sci fi/fantasy apocalyptic. It's not completely similar to this but the whole concept of experiencing outside for the first time and learning how to survive is the same.

Author's Response: Well it would be stupid if they went back eh? I didn't think we insinuated that Kevin founded the village did we? if we led it that way I apologize as I don't think we intended that. Kevin found the village already they, they took him in and then the Luminary found Kevin and the village and struck that deal. I think they searched for the escappees in hopes of catching them before they could have a chance to reach Kevin and the village. They might not have made it there either if the three had gone a different direction they might have missed the village altogether. I'll have to look into that show.

Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/09/12 07:01 am Title: Chapter 17

At leadt they know why Kevin did what he did by staying away from Endwise. Sounds like Brian could be the one he was talking about. Ooh sparks fly for Nick and Emma but I can't help but think AJ saw them kiss. This could bring up some drama later. Great chapter, ladies. Looking forward to more :)

Author's Response:

You know me (Lore), Tracy.  I love to add a bit of romance into my stories. In fact, I have very few that don't have romance in them... *ponders* hrm perhaps I should write one without? LOL.  Thanks for the review Tracy, hope you keep enjoying the fate of our three escapees. :)

Reviewer: KimberlyCan Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/09/12 06:48 am Title: Chapter 17

Good chapter!  “Br…The Luminary let me live.” Brian is The Luminary???? even though he was the only one missing I still didn't see it coming.  Guess bc in real life their roles are reversed with Kevin being the older "brother."

Can't wait to read more and see their adjustment to their new home.



Author's Response:

What, Brian an evil man bent on keeping people under his thumb? nooooo, it can't be....  Thanks for the review Kimberly. :)

Reviewer: Tri Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/09/12 03:12 am Title: Chapter 17

Hmm, who's the mysterious figure? And is Brian the Luminary? Is Emma gonna sneak away and head back to Endwise? So many questions! Ladies, don't keep me waiting too long for another chapter! This keeps getting better...

Author's Response:

*giggles* I love that you have so many questions. We hope that we pick up the pace writing these chapters again so that we can share what we have written. :) Glad you are enjoying, thanks for the review Tri.