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Reviewer: Mare Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/19/14 10:59 am Title: Chapter 18

Ah, hunting time. And I am reading this story at ungodly hours of the morning, so I might not completely comprehend some things fully or miss details etc...I'm not sure if you guys had said Kevin founded the village but that's how I understood it, so if I'm wrong I apologize. So saying that, I thought that Brian went back to Endwise and left Howie in charge of finding the escapees? Maybe I just need to read later in the day. lol

Author's Response: Oh, I hope we made sense in this. I often can't take things in at certain times of the day either.

Reviewer: Tri Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/02/12 03:21 pm Title: Chapter 18

It's so weird thinking of Brian as the luminary now. I'm hoping that jealousy doesn't come between Nick and AJ, but I have a feeling it might. Can't wait for more! :)

Author's Response:

Evil Brian, lol, but he really does seem to fit the part in this story...or he does in mine and Lore's minds :)  Yes, jealousy could become a problem, we'll have to see about that.  Thanks for reading Tri :)