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Reviewer: Mare Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/20/14 10:40 am Title: Chapter 19

I can completely see Kevin being the teacher and making them observe before they try to kill, that's very Kevin. I am happy that the other three decided they didn't enjoy hunting. *shudders* that's one of the things I like to call my run away while you can traits while looking for a man. If I find out they are hunters, automatic turnoff. lol

That being said, I kind of wish that Emma would have been hit in the head with an arrow because this little love triangle...Oh, AJ! The thought of AJ even trying to hunt cracked me up. I would say AJ needs to be hit in the head with an arrow but I need the boys alive so it's Emma that has to go!

Author's Response: Yes, I agree on the hunting thing lol. Luckily hunting isn't really something that's done over here. AJ would not be a very good hunter would he? lol

Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/15/12 08:13 pm Title: Chapter 19

I liked the hunting stuff in this chapter, it was really interesting. I'm glad Emma and AJ talked, but I feel like this will cause tension between AJ and Nick later. Great chapter again, I am still enjoying it :)

Author's Response:

thanks for your review Tracy! The hunting part was a bit different to write since I've never hunted before. I actually had to research snares and how you set them and how they work when they are triggered. LOL.   It is good that AJ finally talked with Emma but it can only add drama later. Thanks again Tracy!!