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Reviewer: Mare Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/29/14 12:39 pm Title: Chapter 21

Wow, so they really built this town up with streets and buildings? That's not at all what I had pictured in my head. Too bad Kevin didn't just kill Brian while he was only guarded by two men. AJ's going to do something dumb, I can feel it. LOL

Author's Response: It is a well built up unknown little town, except we the Luminary and some of the guards know about it... heh. We have to have someone do something dumb right? do we get kudos for not making it Nick?

Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/24/12 09:32 pm Title: Chapter 21

Oh wow. See I knew Brian had to be the Luminary....but he knew that Kevin's village exists? That bit surprised me a little. If he knew they were there, why is he letting them stay there?

As for AJ....he is gonna expose them because he is jealous of Nick and Emma. Oh lord. I can't wait for what will happen next. Great update ladies!

Author's Response:

heehee yes Brian, evil Brian.  I have often said that pissed off Brian is hot (though I don't really want to deal wtih a pissed off Brian).   Shocking what he's known this entire time huh? We shall see what AJ plans on doing, it comes to light soon.  :) Thanks for the review Tracy, means a lot to us that you have stuck with us. :)