Date: 07/09/12 06:48 am Title: Chapter 17
Good chapter! “Br…The Luminary let me live.” Brian is The Luminary???? even though he was the only one missing I still didn't see it coming. Guess bc in real life their roles are reversed with Kevin being the older "brother."
Can't wait to read more and see their adjustment to their new home.
Author's Response:
What, Brian an evil man bent on keeping people under his thumb? nooooo, it can't be.... Thanks for the review Kimberly. :)
Date: 07/09/12 03:12 am Title: Chapter 17
Hmm, who's the mysterious figure? And is Brian the Luminary? Is Emma gonna sneak away and head back to Endwise? So many questions! Ladies, don't keep me waiting too long for another chapter! This keeps getting better...
Author's Response:
*giggles* I love that you have so many questions. We hope that we pick up the pace writing these chapters again so that we can share what we have written. :) Glad you are enjoying, thanks for the review Tri.
Date: 06/26/12 01:21 am Title: Chapter 16
Really enjoyed the new chapter! I'm really like reading these everyday life experiences that they have no idea about. For example them not understanding the risk in childbirth. Really interesting to read their point of view.
Looking forward to reading more and seeing how the meeting with the mayor goes.
Author's Response:
Sorry I just noticed this review! Yes, it is interesting that they don't know a lot about life, they've led a very sheltered existence in Endwise. Thanks for reading and reviewing :)
Date: 06/25/12 06:17 pm Title: Chapter 16
Oh eesh that's crazy! You're doing such a great job of showing situations that Nick and AJ wouldn't be accustomed to. It's so interesting! I can't wait for more... I'm sort of wondering if they're going to think life outside of Endwise is too tough... Update soon!!
Author's Response:
It's definitely not the paradise they thought it would be! Thanks for reading Tri :)
Date: 06/11/12 09:13 pm Title: Chapter 15
Interesting!! I can't wait for more... Great job with it!!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review Tri! glad you are still interested. :)
Date: 06/11/12 06:09 am Title: Chapter 1
I really liked the new chapter and how we got to see a little more of the history of Kevin and how he is half-brother to the Luminary.
I also really loved how Nick jumped at the chance to be a hunter like Kevin.
Can't wait to read more!
Author's Response:
I liked writing the little bit of information about Kevin. I like where it is leading (you will get to know one day). I think Nick would definitely jump at the chance to hunt like Kevin, that is until he finds out what hunting entails. LOL Thanks for the review.
Date: 05/25/12 03:25 pm Title: Chapter 14
I like that there's a hint of romance in the air with Emma and the guys (just wondering which guy, if either, wins her haha). It's so interesting to find out that there's a whole community of people who have lives outside of Endwise. It's gotta be complete shell shock for them to find out that everything they grew up believing is fake. I can't wait for more! :)
Author's Response:
It would be shocking to find out everything you believed was a lie, but hopefully things will get better for them! Thanks for reading Tri :)
Date: 05/25/12 03:21 pm Title: Chapter 13
I've been waiting to get a free moment to read this for a while and it was worth the wait! I'm so excited that Emma, Nick, and AJ are going to learn about others who have escaped. I'm hoping they will be able to stay safe from the Luminary and his forces, though... Eesh. Great work, ladies! :)
Author's Response: thanks for the review Tri, glad you are still enjoying the story. :)
Date: 05/12/12 12:39 pm Title: Chapter 13
Seems all is not well in Endwise, there seems to be a shift going on. Glad they met up wish some more people, hopefully more answers will come about soon. To me there is a huge conspiracy and they are slowly unraveling it. Can't wait for another chapter :)
Author's Response:
more people is always better! No, Endwise definitely has some problems. Thanks for reading and reviewing Tracy.
Date: 05/06/12 05:15 pm Title: Chapter 12
Ooo, nice image of Kevin and I'm not usually into him! lol. Anyway, great chapter!! I'm sorry I didn't read it sooner. :) I can't wait to see where he takes them. Hopefully this is the beginning of a new life for the three of them! Can't wait for more!!
Author's Response:
Mmm Kevin, lol. Don't worry, I'm always falling behind on things. Let's hope they end up somewhere nicer :) Thanks for reading Tri
Date: 04/27/12 11:06 am Title: Chapter 12
Wow how did I figure the man was Kevin before he said his name lol. I'm glad they found other people....and hopefully none of them will get caught by the luminary. Sorry it took me a while to catch up :) still enjoying the story ladies! Keep it up!
Author's Response:
It's good they've finally found more people, let's just hope the evil luminary doesn't catch them! Don't worry about falling behind at all, I often fall behind on stories and then catch up, just good to see you are still reading and enjoying it :)
Date: 04/27/12 01:29 am Title: Chapter 1
Yes, they have found life on the outside! and Kevin has shown up!!!!! Can't wait to see where this story goes next!
Author's Response:
Yay, Kevin is there at last! Thanks for reading Kimberly, hope you enjoy where we take it next :)
Date: 04/23/12 08:45 am Title: Chapter 11
Hmmm. Something still doesn't feel right about Evan for me. And AJ has feelings for her....this could make things interesting. Enjoying the story....took me a bit but I'm still reading. Great chapter girls!
Author's Response:
eegad I missed this one. AJ definitely has feelings ... and that always makes things interesting right? Thanks for the review Tracy.
Date: 04/17/12 04:00 am Title: Chapter 1
Looking foward to more and when you bring the other guys into the story!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review, the other boys should be showing up soon.. ;)
Date: 04/10/12 09:30 pm Title: Chapter 10
Something tells me they shouldn't trust Evan. Just because he lies to the luminary doesn't mean he won't lie to them to save his ass. I have a feeling he's crossing them. Great chapter ladies!
Author's Response:
Hmm, it's hard to know who to trust isn't it? Thanks for reading and reviewing Tracy, so glad you're still enjoying it :)
