Date: 04/09/12 10:00 pm Title: Chapter 10
Oh wow... I'm glad that they got out of that situation, but I'm still so worried for them... What if he's just lying so they can make them do the dirty work, find a place to settle outside of Endwise, and then kill them for rebelling? Haha, I don't know... Just worried about what the possibilities could be and I'm not sure whether we can completely trust Emma and now Evan. Can't wait for more! Good chapter. :)
Author's Response:
Thanks Tri, we shall see, hehehe. Glad you enjoyed the chapter :)
Date: 03/31/12 03:37 am Title: Chapter 9
Oh whoa!! Crazy stuff going on... Don't make us wait too long for a new chapter. :) Loving it, ladies!! So scared for them, but I really can't wait to see where it goes from here...
Author's Response: Glad you are loving it Tri. Hopefully you will not have to wait too long for the next chapter.
Date: 03/30/12 10:38 pm Title: Chapter 9
Oh snap. Looks like they ran into some trouble. I wonder who got shot....and who was the shooter, is it friend or foe? Loving this story, as I've said before it is very interesting and I like the little bits of information about their society. Great job girls!
Author's Response:
Date: 03/23/12 05:14 am Title: Chapter 8
Whoa!! Talk about cliffhangers... Now I'm dying to know what's ahead for the three of them. Great chapter! Even though there's hope for them, I feel like things are going to be incredibly difficult out in the world. I can't wait for more. Update soon, ladies! :)
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading Tri, we're glad you're enjoying the story :)
Date: 03/17/12 08:12 am Title: Chapter 7
Ooo awesome job! I was so happy when they realized their palms were no longer colored. I'm so anxious to read more... I hope they're able to get far enough away to make some sort of life outside of Endwise. I wonder if they'll meet anyone else while they're running. Again, great job!! Please update soon. :)
Author's Response:
Date: 03/17/12 03:45 am Title: Chapter 7
Wow! I am really loving this story. Nice to see Howie pulled into the story as second in command of the Luminary. Now who is first? Kevin or Brian? One of them I imagine leads the Luminary and one the rebels? hmmmm, can`t wait to read more!
Author's Response:
Date: 03/17/12 01:08 am Title: Chapter 7
Curiouser and curiouser. Lots of information again, I really liked this chapter, I also wonder why they were lied to about the outside world. I hope they manage not to get caught by the guards but as Howie said it won't be easy for them. Great chapter, looking forward to more :)
Author's Response:
Date: 03/16/12 09:21 pm Title: Chapter 7
You got me hooked to this story. Can't wait for an update!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much Jennifer, we are so glad you are hooked and we hope that we can keep you intrigued. Thanks so much for leaving a review it means a lot to the both of us. :)
Date: 03/09/12 03:51 pm Title: Chapter 6
Hmmmm. They finally made it outside. Can't imagine what it is like not to see a tree before. Glad they can finally see what they've been missing all this time. Hope they don't have to run too far either. Great job yet again, sorry my review is late. Been a busy girl ;)
Author's Response:
Don't worry Tracy, we know what it's like to be busy with work, family life, etc. Glad you're still enjoying it. I can't imagine never seeing those things either, would be like us stepping on another planet I suppose. Thanks for reading :)
Date: 03/08/12 05:14 am Title: Chapter 6
Great chapter! It's really cool to read about how they're viewing things for the first time... Things we may take for granted. :) I'm anxious to see what lies ahead for them still... And I wonder how long they'll have to run until they're "safe." Great job as always, ladies!! Can't wait for more.
Author's Response:
I know, imagine not knowing what a flower or a tree looked like! Hmm I wonder when they'll be safe too. Thanks for reading and reviewing Tri, we're glad you are enjoying it :)
Date: 02/28/12 05:39 am Title: Chapter 5
Really great story so far! I love AU! Can't wait to see how you bring Howie, Brian and Kevin into the story. Are they on the outside? Can't wait to see where this goes!
Author's Response:
thanks for reading and reviewing Kimberly, it's always nice to get a new reviewer into the mix! You shall see how the others become a part of the story, we have them planned into it so rest assured they all will make their appearances. :)
Date: 02/28/12 04:27 am Title: Chapter 5
Well looks like they made it out but how long before they either get caught or wonder what the real story is about living underground. Love what you're doing with this story, its awesome so far!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading Tracy! They did make it out, but for how long? O_o Thanks for the revew. :)
Date: 02/27/12 10:16 pm Title: Chapter 5
YAY! They made it outside... And a tree! Awesome! I can't wait to see where their escape takes them... This is only the beginning, I can tell! :) Great chapter. Update soon!!
Author's Response:
Yay! they did make it out! We shall see how far they get if they get far away from this city! For all their sakes I hope they do! heehee but like Steph mentioned, we can't let them go witht out some torture. Thanks for reading Tri.
Date: 02/21/12 10:04 pm Title: Chapter 4
Hoping they don't run into any trouble. The using "credits" instead of money reminded me of Star Wars. I love it. Great update, hope to see more soon...I'm enjoying this!
Author's Response:
I'm sure it won't be that easy for them, hehehehe, this is me and Lore writing and we like to give those boys a hard time :) Yeah, credits is a good currency as money is useless in Endwise. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing Tracy, we both appreciate it.
Date: 02/20/12 06:42 pm Title: Chapter 4
Ooo! I'm glad she showed up. I was PSYCHED to see a new chapter up today! :) I can't wait to see if they manage to get out of there and what they find outside of their community... Can't wait for more!
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for reading Tri! We're both so glad you're enjoying it. Hmm I wonder what they'll find?
