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Reviewer: kevmylove Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/17/12 12:54 am Title: Chapter 1

So I read this a few days back when you posted and I wasn't able to leave a review...here I am.

So far very intriguing. It sounds dreadful where they are. I wonder what's up with the colored shirts.



Author's Response:

yay Erika's elusive review! LOL.  Thanks for coming back and leaving us a review we appreciate it.  The colored shirts... notice one is wearing .... purple.... heeehee. Okay really had nothing to do with me and more so the story but it was just funny that it was Nick who ended up in purple. :)  Thanks for the review, we both hope you continue to read and enjoy.

Reviewer: Tri Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/16/12 03:10 pm Title: Chapter 3

Okay so I couldn't resist reading this before the students got here this morning... I am loving this story and I cannot wait to read what happens next!! I'm so anxious to see if they escape and find out if there's life outside of their current situation. Update soon please, ladies! :)

Author's Response:

I love that you couldn't wait to read the next chapter, it makes us both feel so good to get feedback like that.  We are being stingy with our chapters, we have more but we want to make sure that our chapters all flow and make sense with the ones that follow so that we don't confuse the readers. Thanks so much for your review Tri. :)

Reviewer: Tri Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/16/12 03:10 pm Title: Chapter 3

Okay so I couldn't resist reading this before the students got here this morning... I am loving this story and I cannot wait to read what happens next!! I'm so anxious to see if they escape and find out if there's life outside of their current situation. Update soon please, ladies! :)

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading, so glad you're enjoying.  I like to sneakily read in work too, hehehe :)

Reviewer: Tri Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/16/12 02:18 pm Title: Chapter 2

Oh wow... This is great! I think that AJ and Nick both have valid points, but the question is who should they trust? I'd go with the girl rather than authority, but that's just me. lol. I hope Nick doesn't stop dreaming and tries to get out of there, hopefully before AJ's time is up. I have to leave for work in a few, so I'll read the next chapter later! :) Great job!!!

Author's Response:

Yeah, it's hard to know who to trust.  Hopefully they made the right decision :)  Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Tri Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/16/12 04:31 am Title: Chapter 1

Wow! This is so intriguing so far and such a refreshing change of pace from what I have been reading lately. I can't wait to read more, but I just wanted to let you know how much this first chapter drew me in. :)

Author's Response:

thanks so much for taking the time to check this story out. steph and i are having so much fun writing it. thank you so much for the review. it makes us happy to see ppl giving the story a shot. 

Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/15/12 09:24 pm Title: Chapter 3

I'm starting to think the shirts have something to do with age. I'm really digging this story though, its very interesting. I love it, great update.

Author's Response:

Very perceptive Tracy ;)  I am glad you are liking the story, like we keep saying, Steph and I are having a blast writing this together. Coming up with the plot and ideas is so much fun that we are glad there is someone that is also enjoying what we are doing.  Thank you for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/12/12 12:22 am Title: Chapter 2

Wow. I like how you're revealing information a bit at a time....but I'm curious about the colored shirts and what they distinguish. Great update, hope to see more soon!

Author's Response:

The reason behind the coloured shirts will be revealed eventually.  Glad you are enjoying it so far Tracy, me and Lore are really enjoying writing it :)

Reviewer: Alexsgirl_ritz Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/10/12 06:36 pm Title: Chapter 1

ooohh... the shirts caught my attention. I love the color purple but I don't know what it means if you're wearing one.... this is interesting. I'm not really into AUs and Sci-fi but this is interesting.... :)

Author's Response:

Hey Ritz! thanks for coming over to this story and taking a chance. We are having fun writing it and hope you enjoy it as much as we do.  I believe what the colors mean will be revealed over time. ... Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/10/12 09:52 am Title: Chapter 1

I was browsing most recent, and this story seems right up my alley. I love science fiction!!!! I am really intrigued and can't wait to see what else you've got planned for this because its awesome.

Author's Response:

Yay Tracy so glad this caught you eye!! We already have a few chapters written because we are having so much fun writing so hopefully another update will be soon.  We hope you continue to enjoy the story as much as we do. Thanks for taking the time to review!

Reviewer: rachel21 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/09/12 09:11 pm Title: Chapter 1

Ooh looks good. I'm not one for AUs either. lol

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review Rachel.  We are glad we caught your attention and hope to continue to catch your attention as the chapters go on. :)