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Date: 07/11/14 10:07 pm Title: Chapter 18

Whoa! Is the second scene of the story really happening or Annie is just dreaming? That is one hot scene but would have wanted for Nick and Annie to wait a little longer.

I enjoyed the water fight scene. 😊

Author's Response: Well, you already know how that one ended...

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Date: 07/11/14 08:42 pm Title: Chapter 17

Awww... Drew on Nick's back is priceless. I would definitely understand why it melted her heart. 😊

I am glad Drew is Annie and Andrew's son. It is just sad that Andrew (the father) didn't get to meet Drew.

Author's Response: You're right. It is sad. The missing husband is kind of a theme throughout the story, though.

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Date: 07/11/14 08:36 pm Title: Chapter 16

That must have been so hard for Annie. Can't blame her if she was drunk for a month. You described what happened in a very good way, but I am still confused. Glad Brian asked that question about Drew and his father. Hopefully, there's a clear answer on the next chapter. 😊

Author's Response: A little insight on this chapter-- I was living in Lexington, KY at the time this actual event took place-- the story about the scene in the ER is from an eyewitness who I happen to be very close to.

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Date: 07/11/14 08:27 pm Title: Chapter 15

Her husband died 5 years ago and Drew is just almost two? I think I am confused as Brian. I better hit next now and hopefully, Annie answered the question 'what happened?'

Author's Response: The next chapter was one of my favorites to write-- it gives so much of Annie's backstory that sort of makes her who she is in the story.

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Date: 07/09/14 01:32 pm Title: Chapter 14

This is a cute chapter... Would love to see Nick and Drew, it must have been so cute having same clothes. 😊

Author's Response: That was one of my more random ideas in this story, but it worked out :)

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Date: 07/09/14 01:25 pm Title: Chapter 13

Hi Emily, I really hope you didn't think I stopped reading your story. I was just busy with lots of client meeting for my firm.

This is a short chapter but really important for the story line. And a 500k dollars ring? Wow! That must be one hell of an engagement ring. lol

I tried to imagine Leighanne cuddled up with Nick and being that close... The picture looked so wrong. lol But I like that for once Leighanne and Nick are close. I think that's the way it's supposed to be in real life. 😊

Author's Response: That is exactly the way I wrote Leighanne and Nick in this story-- the way I think they SHOULD be.

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Date: 06/25/14 03:01 pm Title: Chapter 12

"Tiny, impressionable ears! " I really love your sense of humour. Wonder if you are like this in real life or this is just "Annie". 😊

Author's Response: Lol. Annie has a lot of me in her, if I'm being honest.

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Date: 06/23/14 10:19 pm Title: Chapter 11

Whoa! Leighanne is concerned about Nick, and she didn't mind watching Drew while Annie spends time with Brian? I haven't met Leighanne in person so I really don't know how she is on real life but she is not this sweet and kind to most fanfic writers. I'm not used to this. lol

Author's Response: Haha. I felt like writing Leighanne like this was more beneficial to the story. I wanted the readers to like her character. Plus, it's different.

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Date: 06/23/14 10:12 pm Title: Chapter 10

Yay, Nick! 😁 So, there was no really "something" between Brian and Annie. lol I like your sense of humour. It seems like it comes naturally, not the kind of over the top or trying hard. 😊

Author's Response: The humor somehow came pretty easily in this story. As far as Annie and Brian go, I'm not quite finished with their storyline at this point in the story, so I will neither confirm nor deny what you're thinking here.

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Date: 06/20/14 10:05 pm Title: Chapter 9

It's good that you explained further the situation of Annie didn't even have a clue that Tim and Kevin are brothers. It was a bit unbelievable at first for some reasons like Leighanne pointed out. That was really good.

Author's Response: Thanks! I tried to make this as believable as possible... For a fanfic, anyway :)

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Date: 06/20/14 09:57 pm Title: Chapter 8

Yay! She agreed to at least try the duet thing. And if you continued to write Leighanne this way then I would really be surprised. She seems so sweet and kind. lol

Author's Response: I have my reasons for writing Leighanne the way I did.

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Date: 06/20/14 09:51 pm Title: Chapter 7

Glad to finally read some backstory. I can really understand where she's coming from. She couldn't just take risk, she has Drew to think of.

Author's Response: The backstory is a huge part of the story, as you'll see later on.

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Date: 06/15/14 04:47 pm Title: Chapter 6

Oh my... You just got my first tears for this story. I really like how you describe the situation. You are really good at it. I felt the panic and rush that was going on, was on the edge of my seat. Poor baby boy. :(

PS. Apologies if sometimes you will not understand what I am saying. English is not my native language and sometimes it's hard to express what I really want to say. 😊

Author's Response: I had to go back and read to see what chapter this was. I'd almost forgotten about it. This is kind of a character building chapter to get you to know Annie a little better. (So far, there doesn't seem to be much of a barrier with the language thing. I'm reading you pretty well, I think. Just write what you're thinking. I'll ask if I don't quite understand.)

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Date: 06/15/14 04:39 pm Title: Chapter 5

Now, I wonder where is the husband. Annie seems like a very nice girl.

Author's Response: The husband is coming up pretty soon. There's a lot of backstory there.

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Date: 06/15/14 04:33 pm Title: Chapter 4

That was cute! And recording a song with Brian will be the start of something interesting. 😍

Author's Response: Definitely!