Date: 06/15/14 12:54 pm Title: Chapter 3
Nice to know Baylee won't need surgery, and I think the story is getting better now that Brian has to stay in town. Can't wait to see Leighanne added into the mix. :)
Author's Response: You may be surprised with how I write Leighanne's character. A few readers were.
Date: 06/15/14 12:47 pm Title: Chapter 2
Poor Baylee... So, Leighanne and Brian are still together. I thought they are kinda separated, and Brian will fall for Annie while Annie will fall for Nick. I guess, I need to click that next button to find out. :)
Author's Response: I like seeing the theories about what's going to happen :) Keep them coming!
Date: 06/15/14 12:39 pm Title: Chapter 1
Hi Emily, or Michele? :)
My name is Ritz and I will be reading this story for the summer challenge. Sorry this is a bit late as I've been busy. Business, day job and 3 boys (one of them is a toddler) doesn't give me time to read sometimes. lol
I like how the story started. A lot of things made me smile, starting with Goldilocks. lol And, you are great with descriptions, I mean I felt like I was standing behind Annie and was watching Drew and Baylee as well. And even the scene with Tim, I felt like I was there and part of it. I'm curious and excited to see where this is going. Great job! :)
Author's Response: Hi, Ritz! It's Emily, and I don't know how you do it with three boys! I'm expecting my second, and the one takes up all of my time, it seems. Thank you for the comment on the description. That is one thing I've always strived to do well. I hope this is an enjoyable experience for us both!
Date: 08/29/13 06:37 pm Title: Epilogue
this story was awesome and I really like your writing style and character development. Great job!
Date: 08/29/13 06:36 pm Title: Chapter 55
I've got to admit I was a bit freaked out too. That was a nice way to get closure though. great chapter!
Date: 08/29/13 06:17 pm Title: Chapter 54
Oh Annie have ya runaway from love?!?!
On Nick's birthday...nooo
Author's Response: Oh I LOL'd at this one.
Date: 08/29/13 06:11 pm Title: Chapter 53
Awww she said she loves him. Loved their convo, Nick is such a romantic.
Author's Response: This was one of my favorite parts. I think he really IS a big romantic!
Date: 08/29/13 05:58 pm Title: Chapter 51
Poor Nick he's trying so hard to help Annie. But I understand her too.
How did I guess that ringtone was for AJ...lol. He's too funny, but now I wonder what Nick told big mouth Lauren! uhoh
Author's Response: Am I just making it up, or did AJ sing that song at a concert or somewhere at some point?
Date: 08/28/13 02:58 pm Title: Chapter 50
Wow Annie is being a little harsh and I don't get why. Well...trauma I guess.
I hope drunk NIck doesn't do anything stupid!
Author's Response: Yep, Trauma. More on that in the next few chapters.
Date: 08/28/13 02:54 pm Title: Chapter 49
OMG!!! I had a feeling that was happening. NIck is going to be so upset.
Author's Response: Yes, Nick's going to have a rough time for multiple reasons...
Date: 08/28/13 02:49 pm Title: Chapter 48
OH no what happened to her? MIscarriage? :/
Author's Response: I think you're the first one to call that!
Date: 08/28/13 02:44 pm Title: Chapter 46
Yay Brian had a change of heart and maybe so did Annie!
Author's Response: Yes, Brian needed a little kick in the behind, didn't he?
Date: 08/28/13 02:37 pm Title: Chapter 45
Now I'm mad at Annie...sheesh!
Poor Nick, I wonder if he's gonna find a hoochie and rub her in Annie's face. He can't just sit back and wait till she decides...or can she. Darn it!
Author's Response: Aw... I think this is the first review where there was any anger toward Annie (and I'm not calling it a bad thing- she WAS a little unreasonable). We had a conversation about this on the forum (about our readers' reactions, particularly to our female characters), so it's kind of cool.
Date: 08/28/13 02:30 pm Title: Chapter 44
See what I'm saying. Brian is just too into their business and it makes me really wonder. lol.
I don't think it was cool of him to pretty much announce to the table what happened between Nick and Annie and I'm mad at him for that hehehe.
As for Nick being happy that Annie dragged him away, I'm pretty sure he's gonna hear it too.
I read all three of these earlier but didn't get a chance to review. Sowwy!
Author's Response: No problem! I'm glad it looks like you'll be able to finish on time! Brian is definitely too into their business. He's trying to protect her, but still....
Date: 08/28/13 02:28 pm Title: Chapter 43
I'm pretty sure that tipsy is the only way that Annie would give herself to Nick without freaking out. I just hope things don't get weird between them in the mornin!
Great chapter!
Author's Response: Yep, tipsy is definitely the only way she'd do that. Of course, Nick's drunk, too, so knowing her, you have to wonder what exactly he is thinking, too. Thanks, Erika!
