Date: 04/20/12 03:33 am Title: Chapter 4 - Rebel Without A Cause
Oye vey in a half shell. Maybe if he let her LIVE a little, and not be such an asshole, he wouldn't be having so many problems.
~Lenni~
Author's Response:
too true, Lenni :)
Date: 04/20/12 02:30 am Title: Chapter 1 - Teenage Dream
i am really liking this story. it was interesting to see how nick's mum raised him and his brothers (kevin--is that in tribute to the eldest bsb member? hmmm will we get to see him in this story too?) by herself.
looking forward to reading more!
Author's Response:
thank you!
Date: 04/19/12 11:17 pm Title: Chapter 3 - Lonely
found ur story wow, hope u keep writing this story
Author's Response:
It might come slow, but I will keep writing this. Thank you for your review :)
Date: 03/29/12 03:54 pm Title: Chapter 3 - Lonely
Def gonna follow this story.
Keep up the good work!
Author's Response:
Aww thank you so much!
Date: 03/29/12 04:27 am Title: Chapter 3 - Lonely
Oye vey in a half shell. You don't gotta be such a jerk Nick.
And Hollie, you don't need to lose your virginity just 'cause others have. It's not worth the risk of getting pregnant.
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
Author's Response:
Hollie needs to be told that.. ASAP!!
And Nick needs a parenting lesson LOL
Thanks for your review Lenni! Sorry the updare came close but I did update with two chapters to make up for it ;)
Date: 03/29/12 01:24 am Title: Chapter 3 - Lonely
Nick you need to talk to her. First grounding her for walking home now not talking to her at all. The tighter you hold her the more she will slip away. I have a bad feeling things will get ugly at her party. Keep up the great work sweetie. Your the best.
MArguerite
Author's Response:
Nick needs to be told that for sure!
Date: 03/29/12 12:51 am Title: Chapter 3 - Lonely
OMG i feel so sad now =(
Author's Response:
awww sorry :( have a feeling this is gonna have alot in this.
Date: 03/29/12 12:23 am Title: Chapter 3 - Lonely
both of them really do need to seat and talk about things and work on their feelings another gr8 chapter.
Author's Response:
they definitely do! Thanks for your review.
Date: 03/28/12 04:18 am Title: Chapter 2 - On Without You
Oooh you're in for a surprise Carter. You held the reins a little TOO tight & now things are gonna get ugly.
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
Author's Response:
LOL too true! Thanks for reviewing Lenni. Always love your reviews!
Date: 03/28/12 04:14 am Title: Chapter 1 - Teenage Dream
Grounded for walking home? Get a GRIP Carter.
~Lenni~
Author's Response:
you tell him! haha! Thanks for your review Lenni :)
Date: 03/27/12 09:58 pm Title: Chapter 2 - On Without You
Ah man Nick was real in love with Hollie's mother so sad that he lost her. I hope Hollie realizes what a terrific father she has. Keep up the excellent work.
Marguerite
Author's Response:
He was! He never quite got over it either. Thanks hun :)
Date: 03/27/12 09:31 pm Title: Chapter 2 - On Without You
poor Nick
cant wait for me
Author's Response:
I know, poor guy! Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 03/27/12 09:28 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Teenage Dream
this story gonna be good, oh gonna be troube at this party
Author's Response:
Thank you! And you might be right ;)
Date: 03/22/12 02:32 am Title: Chapter 1 - Teenage Dream
You sucked me in again, I just love all of your stories. I think Hollie is going to rebel big time against Nick becuase he isn't giving her any freedom at all. Can't wait to see where you go with the story....
Author's Response:
haha I'd say I'm sorry, but I'm not, i'm glad you like this.. Im so excited for this story! Thank you for your review!
Date: 03/21/12 10:53 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Teenage Dream
Oh poor Hollie. Nick is scared to lose he so he holds on tight to the reins. I have a feeling this party will backfire. I was soooooo happy to see a new story from you. Excellent start. Please keep it up. You have been very much missed.
Marguerite
(yeah I am your first reviewer)
Author's Response:
Thanks for your review hun!
